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May 20, 2009 19:36

[dormitory fiction: Actress Murdered ( Read more... )

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murdermystery May 20 2009, 22:53:24 UTC
this is fantastic: i love how often the text undermines or subverts itself. slippery slippery slope. and for some reason, i fixate on this line: "Police found her dead inside her apartment in a field. "

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god_jr May 21 2009, 00:45:09 UTC
thanks! i wanted to write something that is like those collages that are overdone: one picture right over another until there's too much information and it doesn't all fit 100%, though themes kind of develop out of it. you know, i posted some collages like that not so long ago.
this story started by first gathering a bunch of news articles and then sticking in a very unreliable narrator in there to string them together.

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