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First try. D;

Jan 03, 2007 20:57

My first official try at Diana/Meg! :D;;

I hate it, and I think my Diana blows pretty badly. In fact, I hate the whole thing; I feel I ended up rambling (from Meg's POV, when I intended to do Diana POV, too) and not going anywhere with the plot...but, here it is, all the same.

Title: 'Gradual'.
Author: Amie (mireille_x).
Pairing: Diana/Meg.
Rating: Pg-13, ( Read more... )

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agentmulder January 4 2007, 13:35:54 UTC

i loved the glimpse into meg's arrival at the orphanage.

'Meg probably wouldn't have questioned her, even if she knew about Diana's doubts. Because to question Diana would endanger this thing; this companionship of sorts, and Meg knew she couldn't live with out that. She figured, in her own way, Diana couldn't either.'

'Either way, whatever it was, Meg could never quite remember how it had all begun. It might've been the day Meg was looking for a book in the library, and Diana had helped her to reach the cursed thing. It might've been the day at dinner, where Meg offered Diana half of her sandwich, and Diana accepted. It might've been one of the afternoons spent in the lavatory stall, talking about the other girls, and questioning their morals in doing such things. It might've begun the first time Diana's hand had moved beneath her skirt, in that same stall; her nails always kept long, and always stinging and managing to keep pleasure and pain so closely linked. It might've been from the moment Meg walked into the Rose Garden orphanage. It could've been fate, for all that she knew.

She just knew that it happened, and it happened gradually.'

so fucking lovely. please write more? i'll beg? i really will?

pyratesss January 4 2007, 14:26:45 UTC

I'll gladly write more~ I'm surprised people actually liked this; I thought it was absolutely dreadful and out of character. :x I've got a little idea goes, so I'll whip the muses and make them work.

I'm still trying to get the guts up for some pure unadulterated Meg/Diana PWP smut, but...I hate my smut, so that one might take a while.

But I have an idea for a cute little drabble of sorts.

P.S: You icon killed me. I laugh everytime I look at it.

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