1st Story DONE
So it turns out that I can't go to Comiket in winter D;
I have to see my dying Italian relatives...at least this means a trip to Italy! (I sometimes wonder if I have a heart)
ANYWAY here is my first story that was going to be in the doujinshi.
I will probably make cheap-o copy books with the second story (Germany/Italy) included and hopefully those will be sold sometime.
"Wow! Look at this!"
"Um Alfred...I'm trying to relax right now so could you be a little more quiet?
"What's that? It looks like a child made it!"
"Alfred! Why are you always coming over to MY house?"
"Why?" "Because nowadays Kiku never comes over to America" "I wonder why that is..."
"Is it the high price of the ticket?"
"Or is it because you've gotten tired of me already?"
"That isn't true!"
"I knew it! I'm so happy!"
"I bought you a ticket already!"
"I'm looking forward to next week!"
"Alfred!"
"Yo, Kiku!"
"What is with that outfit! You look terrible! Hahahaha"
"Hey!"
"Your jokes are weird!"
"Let's go"
"Sometimes Alfred can be rude but there really are a lot of awesome places in America..."
"Why don't we go eat dinner?"
"What are we having?"
"Don't worry! We can eat stuff other than hamburgers!"
(He's eating hamburgers before our meal)
"Wow, so this is what Jambalaya is...Better take a picture"
"Alfred..."
"Today was fun. I learned a lot about America. Thanks"
"Ah! What are you doing! We're in a restaurant!"
"Are you embarrassed?"
"Yeah, here it's embarrassing...Can we move to a love hotel for this?"
"'Love hotel'? What kind of place is that?"
(Oh right, America doesn't have any...)
"Next time you come to Japan I'll take you to one"
"Can't forget my camera!"
Let me know how it was! This is my first completed doujinshi story EVER ^^;
(It's sad because I start so many)
I have to see my dying Italian relatives...at least this means a trip to Italy! (I sometimes wonder if I have a heart)
ANYWAY here is my first story that was going to be in the doujinshi.
I will probably make cheap-o copy books with the second story (Germany/Italy) included and hopefully those will be sold sometime.
"Wow! Look at this!"
"Um Alfred...I'm trying to relax right now so could you be a little more quiet?
"What's that? It looks like a child made it!"
"Alfred! Why are you always coming over to MY house?"
"Why?" "Because nowadays Kiku never comes over to America" "I wonder why that is..."
"Is it the high price of the ticket?"
"Or is it because you've gotten tired of me already?"
"That isn't true!"
"I knew it! I'm so happy!"
"I bought you a ticket already!"
"I'm looking forward to next week!"
"Alfred!"
"Yo, Kiku!"
"What is with that outfit! You look terrible! Hahahaha"
"Hey!"
"Your jokes are weird!"
"Let's go"
"Sometimes Alfred can be rude but there really are a lot of awesome places in America..."
"Why don't we go eat dinner?"
"What are we having?"
"Don't worry! We can eat stuff other than hamburgers!"
(He's eating hamburgers before our meal)
"Wow, so this is what Jambalaya is...Better take a picture"
"Alfred..."
"Today was fun. I learned a lot about America. Thanks"
"Ah! What are you doing! We're in a restaurant!"
"Are you embarrassed?"
"Yeah, here it's embarrassing...Can we move to a love hotel for this?"
"'Love hotel'? What kind of place is that?"
(Oh right, America doesn't have any...)
"Next time you come to Japan I'll take you to one"
"Can't forget my camera!"
Let me know how it was! This is my first completed doujinshi story EVER ^^;
(It's sad because I start so many)