Anyone able to edit my punctuation choices?

Oct 02, 2008 19:44

Tension pools.
Under the surface of my skin,
I am swollen with
Trepidation.

Focus love.
Know your way.
Just walk,
Fearless.

Distraction looms,
Imminent Destruction.
Fend you off,
I will.

Create me new.
Bend my will;
Make me whole;
Make me mine;

Again.
I’ll not reap this,
Keep sewing,
Have success.

I’ve missed it so.
Drowned without,
Sank beneath,
Disappeared.

Foolish usurper,
Breaker of future,
Back down.
Blackness.

Light within me
Rise.
Feel the warmth,
Fear the dark.

Focus Love.
You were made for this.
The shine becomes you.
Polished.
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