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[gnashsang]

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[thelastaerie]

Lovely! it's great to see ennis being enthusastic and doing something spontaneous! you almost had a role-reverse there :)

jack looked over lovingly at the man beside him and reached a hand out.

ennis took it and placed it on his thigh, covering it with calloused fingers, saying nothing, but squeezing tight.

Squee! I love this! you don't know how many times I wished they had this scene in the movie!! especially after that heartbreaking "I miss you so much I could whip babies"...

[gnashsang]

i know, right? they sat so far apart in that scene... that always bothered me. jack should be on the ground between ennis's thighs. :D and where were the neck rubs and body massages? LOL.

glad you found it lovely, it was fun to write. xo

[freetraveller15]

I totally agree with you, Jimmy :)
Wonderful one shot.
Thank you for sharing,
Paola

[gnashsang]

oh wait! i meant jack sitting facing away, looking at the fire with ennis, not siting so far away... i wasn't suggesting outdoor sex. :D :D

thanks, glad you enjoyed reading. :)

[freetraveller15]

Oh yes, I know what you meant. The movie hardly ever shows them facing each other, so to speak, even in the most intimate scenes... *sigh*
Hugs,
P.