Comments | gmth: Incest drabble night redux

gmth

Incest drabble night redux

Jun 27, 2004 00:48

We decided to re-visit the theme of incest for our drabbles tonight. Two of these fit that theme, the third is a challenge that maeglinyedi gave me the other night.

( Neville, Frank. All I want for Christmas. NC-17, 285 words )

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Comments 8

tarnationawaits June 26 2004, 22:02:56 UTC

These are all fantastic. I'm totally entranced by the second one, it's so original. I also really like the parallels in the third. Awesome job on all of them.

gmth June 27 2004, 15:32:37 UTC

Thank you! :-)

warped_factor June 27 2004, 00:32:06 UTC

I love the perspective on the last one. It made me think of a broadway musical scene where they overlap the two opposing lead characters' songs. The second one... bwahaha! The first one, I had to admit, sqicked me when I saw the pairing (not so much because they're father and son, but because I figured it would be Insane-Frank), but I was brave and read it anyway, and... it was so sad! Nicely done, though. Poor, sweet Neville.

gmth June 27 2004, 15:34:07 UTC

That Frank/Neville challenge was the inspiration for several very sad, angsty drabbles. Poor Neville. I hope something wonderful happens to him in canon by the end.

Thanks for the feedback! :-)

cluegirl June 27 2004, 08:36:38 UTC

Oh, I like that last one!

gmth June 27 2004, 15:34:28 UTC

*mwah!* Thanks for letting me know. :-)

amanuensis1 June 27 2004, 12:34:11 UTC

Ooh, the third one gave me such grins, enjoying that structure! Oh, okay, I admit it--and I'm also a sucker for Baby!Harry. Major "Awwww"'s! ^_^

gmth June 27 2004, 15:35:22 UTC

Hehehe, yeah, I am, too. Glad you liked it. :-)