Okay, I originally read (and adored!) this a while back, but wanted to wait until I had time to properly review instead of leaving the glibbering, fawning comment that would have come out immediately after finishing. Sorry it took so long!
That said, I think I love you. Bruce and Jason and class issues and violence and sex and just everything mixing together into this beautiful story.
I love love love all the talk of Jason and debutantes and him not fitting into Bruce's neat, rich world. I probably would have been happy to have just read that story, of Jason and the girls and the scandal, because Batman and Robin and socioeconomic politics are just so deliciously sticky, especially with Jason and his history. And all the contrasts between the rich setting - the carpet and the crystal and everything - and Jason as he wreaks merry chaos to his surroundings. Perfect.
And Bruce’s (inevitable) comparisons between Dick and Jason were painfully fantastic.
The fight scene was described beautifully, especially Jason in contrast to the other street fighter he was up against. It’s sounding more and more like the contrasts were my favorite things about this fic, but they’re what stand out the most to me. And I do adore your descriptions throughout.
And the post-fight scene between Bruce and Jason! Guh. Jason so energized and *himself* and clashing against Bruce in all possible ways while Bruce let him steamroll past until taking control. The reflections of himself he sees. The way they clash and the way they meld.
And the porn was hot and sticky and guh.
Dick was inviolable. Dick is what Bruce hopes, but doubts, he could be. Jason, arrayed in anger and spitting a rapid Tommy-gun fire of words and moods, is what Bruce fears, knows full well, he *is*.
Sorry it took so long! Dude, no worries -- I apologize *hugely* for how long it took for me to respond and thank you.
Jason and the girls and the scandal, because Batman and Robin and socioeconomic politics are just so deliciously sticky, especially with Jason and his history Oh, *awesome*. I really enjoyed working that scene, and all its interpretations, out in my head. I'm right there with you on the tasty stickiness of Batman and his underclass urchins.
The way they clash and the way they meld. OH MAN YAY. I, uh, couldn't have found the right words for what I wanted & needed that scene to accomplish, and here you are, *giving* them to me. Thank you so much.
This is truly generous feedback and I can't possibly thank you enough. *dances you*
That said, I think I love you. Bruce and Jason and class issues and violence and sex and just everything mixing together into this beautiful story.
I love love love all the talk of Jason and debutantes and him not fitting into Bruce's neat, rich world. I probably would have been happy to have just read that story, of Jason and the girls and the scandal, because Batman and Robin and socioeconomic politics are just so deliciously sticky, especially with Jason and his history. And all the contrasts between the rich setting - the carpet and the crystal and everything - and Jason as he wreaks merry chaos to his surroundings. Perfect.
And Bruce’s (inevitable) comparisons between Dick and Jason were painfully fantastic.
The fight scene was described beautifully, especially Jason in contrast to the other street fighter he was up against. It’s sounding more and more like the contrasts were my favorite things about this fic, but they’re what stand out the most to me. And I do adore your descriptions throughout.
And the post-fight scene between Bruce and Jason! Guh. Jason so energized and *himself* and clashing against Bruce in all possible ways while Bruce let him steamroll past until taking control. The reflections of himself he sees. The way they clash and the way they meld.
And the porn was hot and sticky and guh.
Dick was inviolable. Dick is what Bruce hopes, but doubts, he could be. Jason, arrayed in anger and spitting a rapid Tommy-gun fire of words and moods, is what Bruce fears, knows full well, he *is*.
Mmmm, yes.
This was gorgeous.
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Dude, no worries -- I apologize *hugely* for how long it took for me to respond and thank you.
Jason and the girls and the scandal, because Batman and Robin and socioeconomic politics are just so deliciously sticky, especially with Jason and his history
Oh, *awesome*. I really enjoyed working that scene, and all its interpretations, out in my head. I'm right there with you on the tasty stickiness of Batman and his underclass urchins.
The way they clash and the way they meld.
OH MAN YAY. I, uh, couldn't have found the right words for what I wanted & needed that scene to accomplish, and here you are, *giving* them to me. Thank you so much.
This is truly generous feedback and I can't possibly thank you enough. *dances you*
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