Devil's in the House

Jan 03, 2010 19:59

Title: Devil's in the House
Pairing: Gen
Warnings: None.
Rating: PG
Summary: In which Sam hustles pool to pay for his textbooks, and an unexpected opponent turns up. Pre-series, outside POV.

Normally, Sam hates this kind of bar, and Zach's not entirely sure why he changed his mind about coming out with them. )

fic: spn, outside pov, dean winchester, sam winchester

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musesfool January 4 2010, 01:16:51 UTC
Aw, Sam. I enjoyed this.

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glorious_spoon January 4 2010, 04:16:57 UTC
Thank you!

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dante_s_hell January 4 2010, 01:17:48 UTC
This was so very well done! The characterizations are just perfect. I love how Dean came through for Sam, mysteriously knowing just what little brother needed. A modern-day gunslinger--what a great description.

Awesome! Very!

Thanks for sharing!

P.S. The outside POV was the best way to go. Loved it. Okay, I'll stop gushing now...Lol!

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glorious_spoon January 4 2010, 04:18:35 UTC
The Winchesters are kind of a cowboy legend unto themselves in some ways. I'm really glad you enjoyed.

I'm also really glad the outsider POV worked; originally, I had the entire story from Sam's POV and I did like three drafts before I figured out that it wasn't going to work. Thanks for the review!

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tigriswolf January 4 2010, 01:25:15 UTC
This is awesome!

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glorious_spoon January 4 2010, 04:18:49 UTC
Thanks!

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glorious_spoon January 4 2010, 04:19:07 UTC
Thank you!

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noirbabalon January 4 2010, 01:51:35 UTC
The voices for Zach and Jerry were really expressive and I loved Sam's consternation and Dean's just messing with him. Really nicely done. Thanks! :-)

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glorious_spoon January 4 2010, 04:20:02 UTC
I always think that Dean would definitely step in to help his baby brother out, but I don't think he could resist screwing with his head a little. Glad Zach and Jerry's voices worked for you too. Thanks for the review!

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