Chances Thrown

[glorious_spoon]

Title: Chances Thrown
Pairing: gen
Rating: R
Warnings: Underage prostitution.
Summary: They need the money.

A/N: Editing my Big Bang right now feels kind of like running facefirst into a brick wall. So, have some short, pointless Dean angst on a familiar theme. :)

Comments

[debbiel66]

This is achingly sad. I like how you write young Dean, but I just want to slap John upside the head and tell him to look after his poor boy who is heading down this awful road. Thank you.

[glorious_spoon]

Thanks :) I think John was pretty blind to a lot of the things his sons went through--he did his best, but goddamn did he make a lot of mistakes.

[zatnikatel]

Gorgeous as always. You break my heart with his teenage bravado, undercut with such brutal maturity. I’ve always believed Dean might have had to do this and I think you’ve just told it like it was… You have a real gift for making your point really sparely but so damned effectively. I love your writing! ;-)

[glorious_spoon]

teenage bravado, undercut with such brutal maturity.

The funny thing is that this pretty much describes the Dean we meet in canon, too. Thank you for such a lovely comment--you always say such nice things to me :D

[zatnikatel]

That’s because your stories deserve it! ;-)

[glorious_spoon]

*blush*

[destro]

and there's nobody there to see that it takes him three tries to get up to his feet.

God, how the details build up to that final denouement absolutely kills me. Of course there's no one there to see, that's why Dean has to do this in the first place. Ow.

[glorious_spoon]

Poor kid, I know. Glad you enjoyed. :)

[amonitrate]

Yeah. What they said:)

Mostly this makes me just. Sad.

[glorious_spoon]

That's pretty much what I was going for, so thank you!

[ginzai]

Oh, Dean. D:

[glorious_spoon]

He is kind of tragic, isn't he?