[KHR fanfic] Strangers on a Train

[gloomy_gloo]

Title: Strangers on a Train
Summary: Yamamoto is just a passenger. Gokudera is just a stranger. They end up sitting across from each other on a train, but where does it take them?
Pairing: Yamamoto/Gokudera
Rating: PG-13
Notes: AU with some slice-of-life. There's 8059, really, if you squint extra hard.
Disclaimer: Katekyo Hitman Reborn doesn't belong to

Comments

[melissa_42]

Nice! Yamamoto would definitely try to strike up a conversation with a stranger, and Gokudera would try to keep to himself as much as possible. Great job!

[gloomy_gloo]

Thank you! Haha yeah, Yamamoto would talk a lot just because he's bored and annoy the hell out of Gokudera XD

[kinsugi]

Wow. Your story was short and spare but it grabbed and twisted my heart. Your writing had a rhythm that fit being on a train, that continuous underlying subtle shifting and movement, and the few, short sentences they actually spoke to each other were dense with history and emotion in such spare words

[kinsugi]

And I have an answer; it's LJ's formatting that won't wrap, because my post was wrapping fine until I posted it, but now the lines go way off to the right. Oh well.

[dicks]

Fantastic! I love Gokudera in this fic iedk why and Yamamoto for being Yamamoto. Is there going to be anymore of this? XDD Anyway write more plzzz \o/

[gloomy_gloo]

Haha, thanks bb~ but I don't think there'll be any more of this since I just wanted to show two people meeting for a period in time kinda thing. But the writing mode has hit me so I shall be writing more 8059 :D

[anikakinka]

"It's normal, Yamamoto wants to say to the man, but it's been an hour since and the right time for that has long been left behind in those shadowy groves in the countryside."
I love this sentence, it says so much.
Well, the whole fiction is nice <3 You can feel their relation even if they don't know each other.

[gloomy_gloo]

Thanks so much~

I'm really glad you can feel that there's a sort of connection between them even though they don't know each other since that's the kinda thing I was going for ♥

[daniakemi59]

wow...really nice :D

like they said...yama is so yama x3 and gokkun is always piss of him
i want more too ;o;...write another chapter please? xD

the end was so cute :D, a little sad..but cute

[gloomy_gloo]

Aw, your comment made me very happy :)

Haha, Yama just never fails to get Goku pissed off no matter what universe they're in XD

I planned the ending to be a bit sad like that so I won't be writing more, but I'm really glad you liked it <3

[nathcoelho]

really like this fic! =)
good writtin
but with a wanting for more, at the end. =3

[gloomy_gloo]

Thanks! Haha, I'm kind of evil for leaving the ending like that but it's good to know you liked it~