a poem
here's a poem i just wrote i think its' good but im not sure
next thing i will post it in one of those poetry commnities to see what people think but i hope they like it i am sensitive about my poety...also i hope no 1 plagarizes it so here goes:
DEATH
once upon a time there wasa a princes
in hell who wore a black dress
she was a gothic princess like snow white
with bloodred lips &skin so pale and light
she hated the world & everything
she felt sorrow because there was nothing
her mind raged & her heart always burning
she wanted to die so she thought ill commit suicide
to end it all il'l take a subway ride
to cony island late at night when no one's there
becaus no more life i can bear
so she went to the peir& jumped in the sea
when she was drowned & dead then she was finally free
no one ever looked when she was missing for over a week
cause everyone hated her & thought she was such a freak
then her dead body washed up under the Verozano
the cops thought she must be a murdered ho
until the coronor found her suicide note
he cried forver because of what she wrote
-the end-