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lolistar73 January 29 2013, 21:10:35 UTC
First off:

“What does Peach need?” he snaps out.

Yunho gurgles. “Cream.”

OMFGOMFGOMGOMFGOMFOMFG

I literally went cross-eyed at the sheer amazing/dirtyness of this bloody amazing smut shot! Holy frig where do I begin? I wanted to leave you two comments because honestly part 1 and part 2 seem like two completely different worlds!

Part 1

Can I just squeeze Changminnie? I could hardly believe that sweet little Changmin (but still a Siwon-hater and snarky ;D) overtook competitive Shim and would actually not only *help* Yunho with his work but also let Yunho *win* to get confidence. That was amazing. This couple is just so bloody amazing.

Yunho, Largfield and Pucci - they are just the perfect little balms to smooth Changmin out and let him express his true personality. I loved the sheer Yunho-ness accentuated by pear drops and sleeping on clothing material but coupled with a single minded determination to complete things at hand (like the alphabetical ordering thing). And the puppies are just so cute - they top off this beautiful family. Cluelessness to get cuddles indeed.

The dogging was amazing. I am not a fan of exhibitionism but the way you wrote Changmin and the scene was something that was hard to get away from. New experiences and all that. Nervous Yunho was adorable too. I love how their dynamics work because when it seems like Yunho is the clueless, nervous, obedient and eager bottom/uke we instead get to see a much more awesome picture of their dynamics with rigid/uptight but insecure Changmin that gets swept away with Yunho's joy of life.

Part 2

-gah- For everything that was sweet in Part 1, Part 2 was just so *dirty*. -drool- I just can't wrap my head around how different the two worlds seem but still there is elements of HoMin in them. Peach was a complete surprise because I never would have expected our no nonsense Prince Shim to be wanted to be treated like a hooker. But even then the transformation was amazing - aside from the glorious smut, I love how Yunho lets Changmin come out of his shell and experience what he wants more than what he should do.

Spoon is just a delight. He is the epitome of fag-hag so you are just left smiling like an idiot at his comments. Oh to have friends like that lol.

This universe is just amazing. I love every aspect of it and getting snippets of their lives makes my day brighter.

So amazing job once again! I'm sure there were a few things I missed pointing out but when I re-read it again I'll drop another review ;D

(The *only* *slight* thing I was a bit unsure of was the time frame in which HoMin made 3 outfits. It seemed like they did it in 9 hours? Is that possible? It may be, but in the original PR it seems like it takes about 2 days to make an outfit. Once again, a very slight detail ;D)

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glitterburn February 1 2013, 11:42:04 UTC
Thank you! LMAO I was actually giggling when I typed the whole 'what does Peach need?/Cream!' exchange because I had *such* an image in my head XDDDDD so I'm glad it worked for you!

hahah I think this Changmin will always hate Siwon, just because! (I started part 8 of this series even though I haven't done 6 and 7 yet and Siwon invites HoMin on his new reality TV show and Changmin just snipes at Siwon the whole time LOL)

And yes! I'm glad you got the MinHo vibe in the dogging scene :D This year I want to write more switch fic and this seemed like a good opportunity to start ^^ Inasmuch as my preference lies with HoMin, it's much more interesting (not to mention realistic) to change things around and have them experiment and play in different ways.

heheh Peach came about from a line in For Fashion's Sake - the whole 'PVC is for slappers and hookers' thing took on a life of its own and, well, Changmin has such sexy long legs and is open to cross-dressing ehehehe Momo-chan ♥

I love Spoon :D He started off as a pastiche of one of the designerrrrrs from PR s4 but now I've watched them all (except the last half of s3!) he's taken on a few characteristics from other flamboyant designers XD And the poor old Estonian Guy, he does actually have a name but I'll probably never mention it LMAO

You're right, HoMin do have a time disadvantage. The one-day challenges on PR are about 12 hours, including the sketching time, trip to Mood, critique, etc. It should be possible to make an outfit in nine hours, though. Yunho probably uses a glue gun to save time. Tim Gunn would not approve XD

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