Fic: The Minor Fall and the Major Lift [TVXQ RPS]

[glitterburn]

Title: The Minor Fall and the Major Lift
Fandom: TVXQ
Pairing: Yunho/Changmin
Rating: NC17
Summary: Yunho wants to impress Changmin by playing Chopin. One problem-he can’t play Chopin.
Notes: PWP for haeym!

The Minor Fall and the Major LiftChangmin comes home to find a grand piano in the middle of their apartment

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[haeym]

sitting in an art history lecture and reading porn, oh yeah, time well spend. i thought i could comment now on some fics instead of reading for afternoon's swedish exam. ahahaha.

but yeah, as i might have said already on twitter, dayummmm. incoherent, willing changmin reduced to that stage is so insanely hot. and yunho, oh yunho. i love how the lack of dialogue electrifies the whole scene. (okay, yunho's mouth is busy doing something else after all) damn, i haven't read good rimming in a while, usually it's written hastily so this was a treat. ♥ yunho calling changmin baby is still the loveliest thing ever. (it's weird how i don't like it in other fandoms at all, but i guess that must be a yunho thing)

“But you’re priceless,” Yunho says, very softly.

YES! ahhh, seriously sexy jung being all fiercely loving and serious at the same time: dead. ooohhh, i can imagine his expression and all. oh dear. your portrayal of yunho in such moments is a spot on, perfect.

i think this one is great when we are looking at their age gap too. i mean, i think you managed to bring changmin's impatient personality in with grace, the very slight difference shows so smoothly. of course it helps that your characterization is excellent as well but their difference in age comes out nicely.

okay what am i even rambling about anymore. :D

He looks down and smiles, that much is standard and completely on script, but then Yunho leans his head towards Changmin’s crotch and inhales, deeply and with obvious satisfaction.

i blame you for planting this kink in my head. yes. god that's hot.

bonus points from celine dion, oh gosh. xD changmin should have started to sing along, he sings so prettily after all. (pun intented)

smokin' hot piano smut, thank you so much! ♥ (≧▽≦) creamed piano will invade my dreams from now on ehehe.

[glitterburn]

I love your priorities \o/

Kiitos! Yeah I usually write such a dirty-talking Yunho so it was different to have his mouth otherwise occupied ;) And I think you're right, 'baby' is a Yunho thing and a Yunho thing only because I scrunch up my face and go 'ergh' if I see it in any other fandom.

Oooh good point about the age gap showing! Yes yes I agree ^^

That Titanic song reference was totally for you and Sohii, your art fic will forever remain a yardstick of awesomeness :DDDD