This story is really, really good! I loved the way you wrote it. The language, the descriptions, the narrative, everything felt different from your other fics and I think that's magical! You're such a great author, with so much talent and imagination. Thanks for sharing this with us! ^^
I speacilly liked so many details: the way Changmin felt inside the chest, the fact that after so many centuries in it he was almost sad to lose its familiarity. And the way Yunho is introduced! Brave but scare and so, so human; relieving his emotions braking things, exploring to calm himself down.
And Changmin's ways to cheat his own heart were so well written! Not long inner monologues but simplicity. And I believe that was the best way ever. Because he knows he has a great attachement already, and Yunho knows, we all know, so when I read it I just smiled and smiled.
My eyes got teary in the end, let me tell you. I really thought Yunho were going to die and Changmin would be sad for the rest of this years. That's why I don't have words to describe how all my heart filled itself with hope and relieve when I read that Changmin was alive. It made the perfect ending, I think.
Thank you! This has been an interesting year for me in writing, because usually I write 60% historical stuff and 40% contemporary, and this is my first long (pseudo)historical of the year. Which feels a bit weird, actually! But the next one is also a historical so obviously it's the time of year for them, haha.
I'm so glad you enjoyed this one ^^ and I wouldn't have let Yunho die, I couldn't write a HoMin fic with a sad ending! Thank you again :)
I speacilly liked so many details: the way Changmin felt inside the chest, the fact that after so many centuries in it he was almost sad to lose its familiarity. And the way Yunho is introduced! Brave but scare and so, so human; relieving his emotions braking things, exploring to calm himself down.
And Changmin's ways to cheat his own heart were so well written! Not long inner monologues but simplicity. And I believe that was the best way ever. Because he knows he has a great attachement already, and Yunho knows, we all know, so when I read it I just smiled and smiled.
My eyes got teary in the end, let me tell you. I really thought Yunho were going to die and Changmin would be sad for the rest of this years. That's why I don't have words to describe how all my heart filled itself with hope and relieve when I read that Changmin was alive. It made the perfect ending, I think.
I love this fic very much!! ^^ Thank you for it!
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I'm so glad you enjoyed this one ^^ and I wouldn't have let Yunho die, I couldn't write a HoMin fic with a sad ending! Thank you again :)
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