Fic: Double Tap [TVXQ RPS]

[glitterburn]

Title: Double Tap
Fandom: TVXQ
Pairing: Yunho/Changmin/Siwon
Rating: NC17
Summary: Changmin has a fantasy. Yunho makes it come true.
Notes: PORN. Barebacking. Spit roast. Poppers. Double penetration. Lucky Changmin. If you haven’t seen Poseidon, Yunho and Siwon in SSAT uniforms look like this. For the Yunho and Siwon doubleteam Changmin prompt on

Comments

[lolistar73]

Back with a more coherent review. Lol your inbox must be flooded with my messages!

Wow, we just had a discussion on Siwon being the 'other lover' lol! And what a fantastic lover he must be ;D I loved this fic right from the beginning, where Changmin was trying to convince himself that it didn't matter that Yunho didn't text him and then his anxiety that something bad must have happened to him. And the way he almost collapsed at seeing the men in uniform was almost adorable (by the third time I read it lol). And Siwon and Yunho manhandling Changmin was so incredibly hot!

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I really loved that even though Siwon was there, he really wasn't anything other than a giant sex toy so it is totally forgivable to have him OOC. I loved that this was so obviously HoMin, and that Changmin even thought to turn away Siwon to have Yunho by himself! I love how focused Yunho was on Changmin and the fact that Changmin literally fell apart - something I have never read in a HoMin fic before. It brought a D/s element I wasn't expecting, but greatly appreciated.

There really isn't much else to say - the sex was phenomenal, every scene of it. Stuffing Changmin from both ends, and then in one hole was absolutely amazing to read and Changmin becoming such a good little sub had me squeeing my yaoi-fangirl heart out. Seriously though, the bit where he headed into subspace (I think that's what it's called?) was like the epitome of ukeChangmin smut scenes.

I loved in the end how Yunho was so fierce in his comment "anything for you Changminnie, absolutely anything". It was adjfdkdjfadfjdka for me, it was just a beautiful ending to such a smutty scene.

What else can I comment on? This was pure smut through and through and all I can say is you write the best smut I have ever read! I'd greatly like to read a sequel in which Changmin fulfills Yunho's fantasy *winkwinknudgenudge* but I guess Changmin dressed as a maid kinda covers that! xD

I can't wait for more of your fics! Congrats on filling so many of the prompts - each requester is so incredibly lucky that it was you who picked up on the idea, because I seriously cannot imagine a better smut writer than you!

Thanks so much for your hardwork, and I can't wait for more! =D

[glitterburn]

Eeee, thank you for such an awesome comment (two comments!) :D This one took me *ages* to write (like, from February HAHA) and I had about five different versions started before I was all 'wtf, just WRITE IT' and I wrote the whole thing in a day. Sometimes I get hung up on stuff and it can torpedo a fic before it gets off the ground *sigh* I'm glad I persevered with this one though!

Subspace or headspace, yes that's it ^^ A very nice place to be! I do like writing D/s because of the power balance and the sheer romance of such a relationship - because of the amount of trust it involves, it's the most romantic thing ever IMO - and HoMin are so well matched that I can see them switching like crazy and giving each other what they most need ;)

I'd greatly like to read a sequel in which Changmin fulfills Yunho's fantasy
LMAO any ideas? I'm still laughing at that Big East question about where they'd like to visit and Yunho said 'Space'. So it kind of terrifies me to think of what he might fantasise about when it comes to Changmin (er, no pun intended!)!!

[lolistar73]

In response to this, I absolutely agree about the charm of D/s. I think I started reading fanfics about D/s only a few years ago and it was straight up smut to me at first. As I've gotten older and read some of the true D/s (where authors actually bother to make it more than smut) I see the trust aspect as well and I couldn't agree with you more. I feel the same way about HoMin as well. Both are so aggressive and domineering in some respects and then submissive and insecure in others. They make the perfect pairing to me :)

And I'm super glad you persevered with this fic too because it is *AMAZING*. It is porn, but it is so so so amazing! I am still at a loss to say why I love this fic so much because it's one of the shorter fics you've written. Yet, I love the idea of harem boy/owned Yunho, and I'm developing a worrying addiction to titty-torturedYunho. Those things combined together in one fic just melted my brain!

For the HoMin/MinHo suggestion I don't think I could give you a presentable idea! D: Since you showed Yunho so dominant and Changmin so submissive, I think it would make more sense if the possible follow up would be a HoMin too (I don't really like reading D/s fics where the top wants to secretly try being a bottom once - it ruins the rhythm for me but if you did it I'm sure you'd do it in such a away that I can't help but like :D). My immediate suggestion would have been cross dressing but I'd like to try and give you a new kink to try. Maybe it could continue on this D/s theme and have them try legit D/s? Or Yunho wanting to do Changmin in his balloons outfit (the deer)? Or in an apron with nothing else on? Or you could do another threesome with someone you’d think Yunho wants to secretly fuck? Oh gosh I’m just no good at prompts lol Maybe the kinkmeme can offer you better ideas? lol I tried ;D

Any how, I am really looking forward to your next fic what ever it may be! xD And I'm looking forward to you replies =D

[glitterburn]

LMAO furry sex, that would be hilarious actually! Hmm I have started a collaring fic but God knows if I will ever finish it, it's been hanging around for months now *crying* I am tempted to do a proper cross-dressing fic though. Hmmmmmm..... *pondering*