Fic: The Pick-Up [TVXQ RPS | AU]

[glitterburn]

Title: The Pick-Up
Fandom: TVXQ
Pairing: Yunho/Changmin
Rating: NC17
Summary: This morning, supermodel Changmin’s biggest problem was running out of cigarettes. His day is about to get worse as a case of mistaken identity sends him into the line of fire-and into the arms of cop/spy/government agent/he’s-a-bit-vague-about-it-really Yunho, who would

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[diagon]

Is it April already

[diagon]

Now here’s the bit where I seriously needed to have a lie down: Changmin swallows. He’d kind of forgotten the last image in the spread. The one of him half naked, wearing buff-coloured, skin-tight jodhpurs tucked into high, shiny equestrian boots. The one with the streak of baby oil daubed from his chest to his abs so the light glimmers from his skin and catches the camera’s eye. The one where he’s holding a riding crop behind his back, the tension in his arms exquisite and suggestive. The one of him looking insufferably arrogant and knowing and hungry.

You know how you’re secretly as good an artist as you are a writer - will you be drawing that anytime soon, please? Please. Please! Feck, if that isn’t the nicest mental image. Oh Yunho, your control is really immense, he must have been soooo burned by Siwon married guy

[glitterburn]

It is indeed April and soon it will be May with the amazing LJ Time Machine!

So Yunho is brie and Changmin is grapes?? LMAO the sandwich version of seaweed and sashimi XD

Wulvr'ampton yow say? Oi'm pretty shure Yunho's dialict is the Kurean equivulunt of Brummie an' certainly ee raps in English loike a Brummie so ee can totally hang owt in the Bull Ring rag market an' showet 'Orlroight bab' an oi'd gew fwoar ee's bostin!

Siwon as the married man LMAO now I can't get that out of my head. I was going to say generic married man is generic, but Siwon can do generic so well... so why not PMSL.

The more I write Changmin, the more I fall for him. So weird! But also very nice because now I have double the pleasure when I look at the HoMin.

LMAO I admit when we watched that ep of Homeland, as soon as that scene happened I thought 'and that's how I'm going to end that fic' HAHAHA

Thank you ♥

[diagon]

Me again.
I was just day-dreaming about this fic and realised something and had to read it through to check.

They don't kiss. Sure Yuhho is kissing and mouthing at the back of Changmin's neck, but Changmin doesn't get a kiss. That's somehow heartbreaking but also hotter at the same time because some writers take kisses for granted, and you've deliberately left their's untested. It makes the mental image of what might happen next even more explosive. Changmin's mouth is so pillowly and expressive it was made for snogs.

[amagiri]

Great night to stay up late haha. Otherwise I would have not seen this until morning.

Anyway, I loved this fic and all the tension between them. And the little rant about brie and grapes amused me more than it perhaps should lol.

[glitterburn]

Thank you ^^ Poor Changmin, traumatised by soft cheese LOL

[glitterburn]

Thank you!! LMAO that first gif always makes me laugh whenever I see it XD

[tokidokiko]

mmm~ serious agent jung was dangerously hot while the ending was slutty sexy. me like-y this story. XD

[glitterburn]

Sexy Agent Jung could protect me any time! Though I think supermodel Changmin might require lots of very personal ~attention from now on... ;) Thank you for reading!

[tokidokiko]

yup supermodel Changmin definitely likes that extra attention XD

[haeym]

guhhh dffgghhjjhjkkaafdg this was so hot that i don't know whether i should be crying or laughing or doing something else...

anyways, i find this quite interesting because of yunho. he's always smiling in other fics (and in real life too) and radiating happiness because of that but the lack of it here induced a pretty nice tension. characterization was superb too.

and totally loved the ending! (makes me crave some more though) this was a good reminder for me that you really are one of my favorite authors haha ♥

[glitterburn]

Thank you! Yes, you totally hit the nail on the head, I like writing Yunho as this bouncy ball of sunshine but he's also very very focused and serious, so I wanted to examine that part of him without all the smiles. tbqh that's why I fell for Yunho in the first place, because of his role in Poseidon that definitely lacked smiles HAHA Glad it worked for you :D