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Azkadellia's Okay! Part 2: Pink House Purchased; Introductions Ensue.

Mar 26, 2008 20:43

AUTHORS: andrealyn and luchia13
TITLE: Azkadellia's Okay! (With Ambrose and the Cains' help), Part 2: Pink House Purchased; Introductions Ensue.
RATING: PG-ish.
EVENTUAL PAIRING: Ambrose/Cain (or Cain/Ambrose, depends on their moods), VERY FUTURE Az/OC, Jeb/OC/OC
DESCRIPTION: When the Witch picks another target, everything changes. Including switching out the ( Read more... )

author: andrealyn, subject: fanfic, genre: au, author: luchia13

Comments 30

magicscalpel March 27 2008, 03:54:42 UTC

May I be so bold as to commence the all around deserved interpretive dance of praise? {:
God, I love your stories. They're just enchanting and I always find myself engrossed in them while my steadily growing pile of homework is glowering and yelling "DO MEEEEE." I don't think I have ever loved Jeb as much as I did and do from reading your stories. And Ambrose is the BADASS he was always meant to be.

Permission to come aboard the good ship S.S. Can't Wait For More, CAPTAIN! :B Keep up the jolly good work, you two~.

luchia13 March 27 2008, 05:23:49 UTC

INTERPRETIVE DANCE?! HOT DAMN! *grabs some popcorn and claps a lot*

We're OBSESSED with Jeb. And I'm, uh. Really, really obsessed with Glitch in any and all forms. Andy gets Cain's brain, I get Glimbrose's. I don't know if it's pathetic or awesome, honestly.

And Part 3 is already about half done, since we had to snip off 10 pages of Part 2, ahaha...ha...

magicscalpel March 27 2008, 05:26:14 UTC

And I'm, uh. Really, really obsessed with Glitch in any and all forms.

I've got a PERTY good idea of how that feels. ♥

luchia13 March 27 2008, 05:28:15 UTC

Oh lordy, do I want to know?

I was stupid enough to get into an RP as him, which is, you know, fun and all, but...MAN I'm obsessed. XD

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redorchard13 March 27 2008, 04:34:23 UTC

GUH!! i LOVE this story! cant wait for more! your Az is PERFECT.

luchia13 March 27 2008, 05:26:49 UTC

THIS MIGHT SOUND STRANGE, but I'd really like to know if she sounds consistent, since, you know. Collab writing is weird and new to us. I like what we've got, but if it seems like her personality suddenly makes a right turn instead of a left...well, I don't think that's happened, but we want to make sure it never does. ♥

But thank you! Sorry to throw an actual crit question at you, but...um. YEAH. XD

tis022 March 27 2008, 07:08:54 UTC

Baby Jeb is adorable! They could move into the car-hold! Awww, I love this story already!

andrealyn March 29 2008, 14:53:05 UTC

SERIOUSLY DID THEY PUT PSYCHIC IN THE WATER?

♥

tis022 March 29 2008, 16:02:33 UTC

yes!... no... I saw "Lars and the real girl" and he lived in the car hold. Also, i mean come on, you said people rented them out right in the chapter... I mean.. I am the worlds greatest detective!

*goggles* maiyav March 27 2008, 17:20:49 UTC

Ohmygoodneessflailsandloveandgahiteetmyeyballsintomymybrainwithtehawesomeness*DIES*

So wonderful and when do you guys SLEEP?! Not that I'm complaining over quik!updates - I feel really spoiled in this fandom, actually, with all the great fic/art/discussion/etc. and people, and this fic just seems to illustrate that perfectly for me, for some reason.

Christ, I know everyone's gaga over chibi!Jeb, and I am, too, but I CANNOT FIND THE WORDS to convey my UNADULTERATED LOVE for your Azkadellia. Bloody hell and beat me with a dead fish, but I <3 that girl so much I seriously have trouble expressing it. Can't wait to see how she gets Ambrose & Cain together - cuz it's her, I know she's gonna be the one to shove 'em at each other, probably with chibi!Jeb totally complicit, nay, accessory before the fact.

Re: *goggles* andrealyn March 27 2008, 18:33:33 UTC

That's it, I'm taking away your crystal ball.

♥♥

Re: *goggles* maiyav March 27 2008, 19:03:04 UTC

Sorry, bad habit of mine. I'll stop skipping pages & sneaking peaks. XD

Re: *goggles* andrealyn March 27 2008, 19:07:40 UTC

YOU SPIED ON THE PLANNING SESSION DIDN'T YOUUUU.

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prongs_padfoot March 27 2008, 18:41:12 UTC

Vunderbar! Took me like two hours at work to read, because I had to keep switching over to the actual program I was working in and pretend that I gave a damn, but it was worth it! I love your Jeb (of course, because Jeb is AMAZING ALL THE TIME) And little Az is such a princess. Its so cute how before lunch she already had a court of followers at school...poor Baker. Don't know what's hit 'em yet.

I hears someone mention an interpretive dance of appreciation...can I join? *pulls out leotard and leg warmers*

andrealyn March 29 2008, 14:51:43 UTC

Jeb is SO AWESOME that every scene I've written has him in it, even if it's just for a two-line bit. THAT'S HOW AWESOME.

And we accept all forms of interpretive dance!

amedia April 1 2008, 00:58:34 UTC

And we accept all forms of interpretive dance!

Wheee!!!! *adds some ninja moves to the dance*

Let me chime in with Much Love for Azkadellia, Princess of Middle School! w00t! I love Ambrose whacking Cain with the briefcase - yay for using what's at hand and non-suspicious.

And the neat little stuff, like the shopkeeper agreeing to vote for Cain because of how he handled the situation, and Cain giving Az a candy bar to make up for missing lunch even though he's mad at her. It's not just the Big Scenes, it's the cool bits of scenery along the way that make this so enjoyable!