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glimmerella

Supplication

Jun 07, 2011 14:24

Title: Supplication
Characters: Sam, Dean, Castiel
Summary: Sam to the rescue -- or not
Warnings: Implications of top!Castiel, spoilers up to 6x22 finale
Note: My first shot at writing Castiel. Be gentle.

( “On. Your. Knees,” Castiel removed his trench coat and loosened his tie. Sam felt his knees weakening on their own under Castiel’s gaze and he dropped, against his will. )

castiel, dean, sam

Comments 18

jadekirk June 7 2011, 18:30:10 UTC

Yikes! I want to know what happens next. Lovely.

glimmerella June 7 2011, 18:55:45 UTC

Hee hee. So do I. <3

insertcode11 June 7 2011, 18:35:00 UTC

EEEEEE!!! \o/ You made my heart race in fear for Sammy! *flaps arms* OMG OMG OMG!

^^ Awesome job, hon. Loved how you packed so much in so few words. I'm so jealous of writers with that capability. ;) LOVE IT.

glimmerella June 7 2011, 18:53:33 UTC

A lot of my brevity tends to stem from pure laziness. I wanted to get to the last line so badly that I made it happen faster. :)

Thanks for your kind review. It's always a treat having my stuff read by my favorite authors.

tornknees June 7 2011, 18:37:13 UTC

:O

But . . . but. . . Cas no! That's not even old testament god! That's like, vengeful spiteful Greek God! I want more but at the same time I really, really don't because I jsut don't think there's anyway poor Sammy would survive. Not with his hellmemories so newly unleashed. . .

Why can't Cas be a forgiving god? *whimpers*

I do really really like this though :)

glimmerella June 7 2011, 18:55:21 UTC

Spiteful Greek God!! Ooh. I was going to make this a one shot, but those three words may have inspired me to write more.

insertcode11 June 7 2011, 20:02:17 UTC

DOO EEEEEEEEETTTTTTTTTT!!!!!!!!!!!!

tornknees June 8 2011, 01:02:27 UTC

I don't know if that's good news or not lol but I suspect whatever the outcome for poor Sammy is, I'm gunna like reading it :D I do like my spiteful Greek Gods :D

heliokleia June 7 2011, 20:27:15 UTC

“Sam, Sam, Sam…" [...] Castiel let out a sinister chuckle. “I wonder if I might be able to find something to stick into you.”
Ei ei ei... mean cliffhanger plus *coughs* filthy promises... should I pout or hug you, dear?^^
*grins hugely*

Hehe... but aside from that let me praise you for your description of a really frightful ex-angel and his not so willingly first umm... follower...
Damn, I can feel the strong vibrations in every single line!^^
*nods**nods*

So, thank you very much, dear, for sharing your first Cas!fic; it was kinda scary *shivers at memory*, it was hawt and also a big pleasure to read.
- Sequel??
*borrows Sammeh's puppy eyes & tries them on you*
♥

glimmerella June 7 2011, 20:39:25 UTC

Nooo! Not the puppy eyes of dooooom!

I can't say no to Sammy--evah.

nancytds June 7 2011, 20:41:57 UTC

Ooh yes im sure Cas can find something to stick into sam quite easily...
Please update

glimmerella June 7 2011, 20:46:19 UTC

Thanks for reading. :)