Weekly Writing Challenge 7/18/2011-7/25/2011

Jul 18, 2011 12:32

Welcome to the fourth weekly writing challenge!

If you haven't read the Challenge description, please read it here.

This week's theme will be: ADOPTION narusasu0531

and the five prompts will be:
- giving it up narusasu0531 
- the kids all grown up pterawaters 
- surprise pregnancy after having adopted ladydreamer 
- "Daddy? Can I have a puppy?" hattalove 
- "I thought I was supposed to be the forgetful one"

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"Daddy? Can I have a puppy?", G, Kurt/Blaine xenachakram12 July 18 2011, 18:30:08 UTC
This is my first time posting, so I hope I'm doing it right. Was I supposed to include the the theme AND the prompt in the story? *bites nails* This is dedicated to ladydreamer because I wouldn't be here if not for her. <3

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Elizabeth has HAD it. She is three whole years old now--she's a big girl!--and it is high time she has a puppy of her very own. She doesn't have much of a plan; she doesn't need one, because her daddies always give her what she wants. So she walks right up to Dad and lays it on him.

"Papa! I love you!" She flings her tiny arms around her seated father's distended belly. She closes her eyes and holds on tight, waiting for him to return the hug.

"I love you, too, princess!" he says as he squeezes her back fiercely and blowing raspberries on her cheek. Dad is a good hugger, even though he tummy is starting to really get in the way.

"Papaaaa..." Elizabeth stretches out her vowels as she looks up at her father with his own hazel eyes. "Can I have a puppy?"

Papa's eyes draw wide and begin to dance with amusement. A huge grin breaks out over his face and he begins to reply before he is interrupted.

"Angel," Daddy says as he walks into the den. "I thought we went over this before." He leans down to kiss his husband hello, before sitting on the arm of the counch and addressing her again. "We're getting you a new baby brother or sister. That's even better than a puppy!"

Elizabeth starts to pout. "But Papa is not done cooking the baby in his tummy yet! A puppy we could have now." Her logic is solid; why doesn't Daddy understand?

Papa just laughs and puts his hand on Daddy's knee. "She has been really good. And you said you would think about it." Daddy sighs. "Besides... you know a puppy is what I've always wanted." Papa grins and makes his eyelashes go all flutter-y. Daddy's face gets really soft at that. Daddy always has a hard time saying no to Papa's eyelashes.

Daddy considers his two favorite people in the world, then rolls his eyes. "Sweetie, why don't we just put your hair in dog-ears? Then you can be your own puppy."

"Honey, we both know I can't rock that look," Papa replies. Daddy laughs, but he gets up off the couch anyway and heads for the kitchen.

"Alright, I'll think about it after the baby comes... and we Scotch Guard all the furniture." Daddy disappears into the kitchen and Elizabeth hears pots clanking.

Papa just winks at her and tucks her between his arm and his side. She snuggles close and puts her hand on his belly, feeling for any movement from the baby. She guesses she can wait for an answer. Besides, once the baby is born, she's totally going to want a puppy, too. Between Papa, the baby, and her, Daddy will have to say yes. Now, it is just a matter of time.

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Re: "Daddy? Can I have a puppy?", G, Kurt/Blaine starry_midnight July 19 2011, 00:17:23 UTC
So sweet! Loved it :)

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Re: "Daddy? Can I have a puppy?", G, Kurt/Blaine bardocksbabe118 July 19 2011, 00:39:37 UTC
First off, this was really cute!! But who's the pregnant one? Kurt or Blaine?

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Re: "Daddy? Can I have a puppy?", G, Kurt/Blaine xenachakram12 July 19 2011, 03:24:07 UTC
Blaine was preggers. I only hinted at it. (He and Elizabeth both have hazel eyes, plus Blaine says in Glee Live that he's always wanted a puppy.) I felt like Kurt's usually the one who gets knocked up, so I wanted Blaine to have a turn. Thanks for reading! :-)

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Re: "Daddy? Can I have a puppy?", G, Kurt/Blaine xenachakram12 July 19 2011, 03:20:54 UTC
Hey, thanks! This comm is so fun!

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Re: "Daddy? Can I have a puppy?", G, Kurt/Blaine starry_midnight July 19 2011, 03:57:07 UTC
Agreed! It's definitely my fun, no so guilty pleasure! I even got brave enough to post something for the last WWC. Lol. Again, Lovely story, I already love the little universe :)

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Re: "Daddy? Can I have a puppy?", G, Kurt/Blaine joyincreation July 19 2011, 04:07:10 UTC
I'm glad you're having fun with us!

Also, to answer your question: yes you do need to include both the theme and (at least) one prompt. However the theme is more of a general direction for your fic to go in whereas the prompt is much more specific and something you need to address directly in your fic (whether it's including a quote or following a specific story line, etc.)

Hope I was helpful, if you need anything feel free to ask!

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Re: "Daddy? Can I have a puppy?", G, Kurt/Blaine ladydreamer July 19 2011, 16:24:29 UTC
It counts. It's about adopting a PUPPY.

Loved it, babe! SO CUTE! And Kurt is doomed, with these three against him. *Hugs preggers!Blaine, who is probably the cutest thing to ever cute, except maybe preggers!Blaine with his daughters and a puppy*

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Re: "Daddy? Can I have a puppy?", G, Kurt/Blaine xenachakram12 July 19 2011, 16:33:30 UTC
Yes! Puppy adoption! I planned that the whole time. *shifty eyes*

Thanks, sweetheart! I remembered Blainers in Glee Live talking about a puppy and inspiration struck! <333

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Re: "Daddy? Can I have a puppy?", G, Kurt/Blaine ladydreamer July 19 2011, 19:15:38 UTC
It is genius, dear!

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Re: "Daddy? Can I have a puppy?", G, Kurt/Blaine ithinkin3d July 20 2011, 18:16:49 UTC
AHHH YOU DID SO GOOD. Your story is super cute. Now if you could just write a payoff scene where Liz GETS her puppy, and names it something equally cute like Pinkie or Shaka Khan.

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Re: "Daddy? Can I have a puppy?", G, Kurt/Blaine xenachakram12 July 21 2011, 04:18:06 UTC
Ask and you shall receive!

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This was a very important decision. Elizabeth was responsible for a whole new member of the family. Papa had done his job... well, kinda. He was supposed to have a girl, but instead he had a silly boy with a little, pointy head. Daddy and Papa promised her that he'll be just as good as a little sister--"you're a big sister either way, honey!"--but she wasn't so sure. She pouted so hard that they were practically begging to adopt a puppy for her, so she guessed everything worked out.

She walked through the yard looking at all the pretty puppies. There were a lot of good choices, but she wasn't sure which one was the right one for her family. Papa held her hand and led her around, while Daddy followed behind carrying baby BJ. Elizabeth was starting to worry that her new brother or sister puppy wasn't there, until a fluffy brown puff zoomed from the building and into the yard.

The puppy ran straight to Elizabeth, jumped on her, jostled her hand free from her papa's, and knocked her to the ground. Papa reached down with concern in his eyes to pull Elizabeth back up, but Liz was too busy laughing. The puppy licked her all over her face and neck and got paw prints on her dress. She petted him and giggled, "He has Papa's hair!"

"Poodles usually do," said Daddy, smiling. BJ gurgled. He thought it was funny, too!

"So this is the one you want, sweetheart?" Papa asked. "A chocolate poodle? I hear they are very smart. And they don't really shed."

"Really?" Daddy's eyes got bright. "Sounds good to me."

"I wanna name him BJ!" Elizabeth stuck her little fingers into the puppy's fur and pulled him close.

"But honey... that's your little brother's name."

"I know, Daddy!" They could share names and clothes.

"Lizzie, I really think he should have a different name, so we won't get them confused."

Daddy made a good point, but now she didn't know what name to give him. She scrunched up her nose in thought.

Papa could tell she was confused. "You could name him after something else you love. That's what some people do."

Oh! Well, that's easy. "Macawoni!" she cried.

Daddy and Papa looked at each other, then looked back at her and the puppy. "Macaroni?"

"I love macawoni!" Elizabeth and Macaroni rolled around in the grass of the yard, him yipping and her laughing joyously.

"Well, I guess we can call him Mack for short," said Daddy.

"I like it," replied Papa. "It's butch."

Elizabeth felt so proud. She had picked out the best little puppy-brother and the perfect name. Being a big sister was gonna be awesome.

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Re: "Daddy? Can I have a puppy?", G, Kurt/Blaine ladydreamer July 21 2011, 12:45:57 UTC
BJ? I think Macawoni is a good choice in comparison. What's it stand for, Beyonce James? Blaine Junior?

Elizabeth is great. Lol, shame on Blaine for not popping out a girl for her. Next time! She'll convince them to try again for a little sister :P

Love this little family.

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Re: "Daddy? Can I have a puppy?", G, Kurt/Blaine xenachakram12 July 21 2011, 14:06:51 UTC
I'm not totally sure what it is short for. I was kind of thinking Burt Junior, but can someone be a Junior if they are not the direct descendant?

Liz will def campaign for a little sister. Once the puppy grows up and her writing skills improve, she's gonna make doggie sandwich board signs. She'll also hand out flyers.

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Re: "Daddy? Can I have a puppy?", G, Kurt/Blaine ladydreamer July 21 2011, 14:13:39 UTC
I think these days you can do whatever you want.

Haha. Gosh, I can imagine it already :D

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Re: "Daddy? Can I have a puppy?", G, Kurt/Blaine ithinkin3d July 21 2011, 14:31:49 UTC
AHHH OMG

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