HSN Exchange Fic: A café called 'Memory Lane', for _harmlessthings

[gleefics_exch]

Title: A café called 'Memory Lane'
Rating: R
Pairings/Characters:Jesse/Rachel, brief (very brief)mentions of Finn/Rachel and other New Directions kids
Warnings: N/A
Word count: 7.101
Disclaimer: This Glee fanfiction is based upon the television show of the same name. All characters and situations other than my own are sole property of Ryan Murphy

Comments

[becca_radcgg]

Awwww, anon, this was really cute. I really loved how you brought up the "epic romance" line from the show because that was really one of my favourite jesse/rachel moments.

Good job.

[fuzzy_paint]

They both knew (even though it was too soon to say it) that they had found were they belonged. I really like this line and the tone it sets for the entire story. It resounds in the "epic romance" moment you recalled from the show in later sections. I like how that thread of - idk the word. Fate, maybe? serendipity? - is woven into the story, echoing when Jesse asks her Why would we do things ‘normal’?” in that one flashback.

The stargazing scene was sweet - this entire fic was sweet - and I really enjoyed it ♥

[unseensorrows]

I love how you switched between then and now!
This was very well written, I loved it!!!!
♥

[owlemporium]

This was really good...it wrapped up everything so nicely. Great job, I loved it. (: