HSN Exchange Fic: The Way You Move (Feeds the Flames), for nyafangirl

[gleefics_exch]

Title: The Way You Move (Feeds The Flames)
Rating: R
Pairings/Characters: Rachel/Mike
Warnings: None
Word count:1445
Disclaimer: This Glee fanfiction is based upon the television show of the same name. All characters and situations other than my own are sole property of Ryan Murphy Productions and

Comments

[badboy_fangirl]

Yum. I floved this. No Mike/Rachel shipper here, but this was a surprisingly lovely pairing and the sequence was brilliantly executed. Great job!

Oh Mike, as captain of the club I feel that we need to push Mr. Schue in a more heavily choreographed direction, and if anyone could come up with something to convince him to stop giving us throwback moves from the 90’s, it’s you. Flutter lashes, step into his personal space, lower lip bite. Between your moves and my brains, it’ll be a cinch. We can prepare it this weekend. Disarming smile, here’s my address, and don’t be late. Sharp heel turn, hair flounce, and ignore the distressed voice calling after you.

And this? Made of win. So Rachel.

[burn_to_emerge]

I've wanted Mike/Rachel since "Gives You Hell" and this satisfied my craving entirely.

The setup itself is fantastic. Rachel's reasoning for recording the practices in the first place is so very Rachel it kills me. And then her method of seducing Mike? I love it.

[abluegirl]

Thoughts upon starting the fic - NGL, anon, the image you painted of Mike dancing in the corner by himself is incredibly hot.

Ten minutes later, the two of them were trying out steps, and Rachel watched as Mike began to fan himself.
LOL, Rachel's devious non-airconditioned plan is clearly working. :) Rachel is indeed very single-minded.

Mike had his eyes trained on her, and with a teasing grin he slowly slid his undershirt up to expose his sinewy waist and toned lower back.
NGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGH. Hot. And, god, the rest of it is like Dirty Dancing, in a really, really good way.

Over all, I enjoyed this one very much, indeed - I just wish it had gone on a little longer. ;)

[ians_grace47]

Freaking HOT! devious!Rachel is awesome lol

[fuzzy_paint]

I love the Rachel POV in this. I think you captured her really well - things like" Rachel's intentions in bringing the camera to Glee club made me smile. It's so very her, and the entire seduction planning sequence, especially this: Flutter lashes, step into his personal space, lower lip bite.LOL RACHEL ♥ Wonderful job on that.

Mike/Rachel is a stealth OTP of mine and this was executed very well!