HSN Exchange Fic: The Sun Never Sets (2/2), for neimans

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Title: The Sun Never Sets (2/2)
Rating: NC-17
Pairings/Characters: Puck/Rachel, Santana, Brittany (implied Santana/Puck, Santana/Brittany)
Warnings: N/A
Word count: ~7000 (total ~15,700)
Disclaimer: This Glee fanfiction is based upon the television show of the same name. All characters and situations other than my own are sole property of Ryan Murphy

Comments

[andbless_mybaby]

HOLY FUCKING SHIT.
HOLY FUCKING SHIT
HOLY FUCKING SHIT

This was insanely hella good.

I ~loved~ Santana in this, that crazy bitch. I adored the backstory with Sue's diary and how you spun it out so gradually throughout the story. Your patience for storytelling gives you away, bb. You have this way of spinning a yarn that keeps me hooked through 15k+ epic words, eagerly anticipating the smut bomb that I just know is coming.

THINGS I LOVED
1.) MILF Patrol. Oh, dear god. I almost never say this, but that demands a sequel. I want my P/R/S threesome, goddammit.
2.) Rachel's complete ineptitude in seducing Puck, despite the fact that - as Santana pointed out - his "yes" is pretty much a foregone conclusion.
3.) B & S making out all over town.
4.) "This is what it's like when I allow you to touch my breasts" = Best Line Award.
5.) The whole Santana + Rachel thing, which kept blurring the lines between animosity, friendship, flirting, and sorority. I loved when Santana manhandled her and insulted her shirt. Also, the way that Santana kept pulling her aside for a private word. That is so 'high school girl,' isn't it?

AND YAYYYYY, THE ENDING. PERFECT NOTE. ♥ ♥ ♥

[andbless_mybaby]

Well, darling. I'm glad you seemed to have enjoyed it. LOL.

Drat! I knew I should've been more stealthy, lol.

Truthfully, halfway through writing this, Santana started to steal the show for me, As much as I love Puck, as much as I love Rachel and as much as I love them together, it was a struggle to keep it from becoming the Santana Show. (I love Santana too, so I wasn't too ~worried about it, lol)

1. MILF PATROL! I think this is my greatest moment of inspiration ever. /ego. I don't know about a sequel (especially at the moment) but who knows? and you know me. 3somes are my fav
2. LOL. I can't really see Rachel being a successful seductress at this moment in time, even after dating both Jesse and Finn. I'm glad it worked for you.
3. YOU KNOW THEY WOULD
4. ♥
5. The possibility of their dynamic has always intrigued me (I not so secretly ship it, but I would adore if they became best frenemies forever on the show)

Thank you so much bb! ♥