HSN Exchange Fic: Drive Faster, Boy, for snoozin81

[gleefics_exch]

Title: Drive Faster, Boy
Rating: NC-17
Pairings/Characters: Puck/Brittany/Santana
Warnings: N/A
Word count:~8,000
Disclaimer: This Glee fanfiction is based upon the television show of the same name. All characters and situations other than my own are sole property of Ryan Murphy Productions and 20th Century Fox Television.
Summary: This takes place the

Comments

[abluegirl]

♥

[abluegirl]

♥ right back!

[dontwannapanic]

So good. ♥

OH THIS LINE, it made me crack up:
Then she’ll get the Puckzilla’s whole enchilada. His raw deal. His whole shebang. His…penis.

I love how you go from Santana's POV, to Puck's, and then finally to Brittany's where it all comes full circle. It all seems very organized and guh, so perfect. All of the smut was hot although I think the P/S in the beginning was probably my favorite.

Anyway, loved it. I was so excited to see Puck/Santana/Brittany on my f-list.

[dontwannapanic]

Puck isn't very eloquent, is he ;)

I'm so glad you enjoyed this! Puck/Santana/Brittany were super fun to write.

[nyafangirl]

Threesomes are always freaking hot, and this is no exception. I particularly loved the Santana/Puck at the beginning - from the pool to the garden shed, totally awesome. Also loved the bits in between POVs - first the texting, then the phone one - great way to segue into the new POV.

One thing, though, maybe try not to put so many prompts in next time. As admirable as it is that you managed to include almost all the prompts, the story felt very disjointed, as if the scenes were written, then a story conjured up to link the sex scenes together.

[nyafangirl]

This was my first time writing Puck/Brittany/Santana (in all the combinations, lol) so I'm glad you enjoyed it. I loved writing the conversation bits in between.

And I appreciate your concrit! I'll try to pay more attention to story flow next time :)

[anonymous]

This was delicious. I loved the changing perspectives. The sex was way hot as well. Very nicely done. ♥

[andbless_mybaby]

Whoa! That was me. Sorry. I obviously spend too much time at glee_anon.

[anonymous]

I'm really happy you liked this! The changing POV was kinda new to me so I'm glad it worked for you :)

[burn_to_emerge]

This is fantastic. I love the way you did the changing POVs. Hilarious and hot all at once, and perfect characterization.

[burn_to_emerge]

I had so much fun writing these three, I can't even. It was like giving my id free reign, or something...

Thank you so much! ♥