HSN Exchange Fic: Of All The Things I Never Expected..., for plotbunny_tiff

[gleefics_exch]

Title: Of All The Things I Never Expected (You’re Number One With A Bullet)
Rating: R
Pairings/Characters: Puck/Mercedes
Warnings: N/A
Word count: 2261
Disclaimer: This Glee fanfiction is based upon the television show of the same name. All characters and situations other than my own are sole property of Ryan Murphy Productions and 20th Century Fox

Comments

[mz_gemini]

NICE!! I enjoyed reading this! And Puck/Meredes is my favorite pairing! haha......

[plotbunny_tiff]

Ok, I want to give you a thousand hearts, but that won't fit well here, so let me give you mine instead.

That was sexy as hell, hilarious, completely IC, and your song choice was perfect. Darling, this is prime cut right here.

“I overheard Hummel talking about your parents being out of town, so I talked him into helping me. Of course, he insisted that Quinn be brought in, and then she laughed at my dance skills so they both got Chang to help with that and he of course brought Matt with him, because the dudes are like attached at the hip or some shit. And then Finn and Berry showed up at some point, like I don’t know how or when, and shit got crazy until Q decided that we should break into your house. And, because I’m a total badass, I was down with that plan.”

That was my favorite part, because I could almost see the little flashback montage that went along with it, and that is exactly what that crazy group would do.

Thank you *so* much! I'm totally meming this for future reading!

[anonymous]

This was great.

I liked how you worked the song into the fic, usually I hate that...

I also lol irl at the whole glee club knowing they were going to have sex. I like that it was a group effort to get Puck laid...

[snoozin81]

There's really not enough Puck/Mercedes fic out there so I'm glad you decided to tackle this particular prompt. I love the pairing and the plot was cute when him wanting to surprise and impress her. Love that most of Glee club ended up in on the plan too, it was a great touch. Good job!

[nyafangirl]

Really sweet fic, even if it's not my fave pairing. As others have said, you kept them in character the entire way through, and not just P/M but the others, too, which is particularly impressive. So many writers focus extremely hard on the core character/pairing and forget to properly characterise the surrounding characters.

Puck's explanation has already been quoted, but I also love Merc's reaction to it... and his confusion.

“So,” she started slowly, “what you’re saying is that nearly the entire glee club knew that we were going to have sex this weekend?”

“Uh…yes?”

A little disappointed that you didn't go further into the sex - that's what the exchange is about, after all, and shirtless Puck isn't really R-rated. But nice job, anyway.