HSN Exchange Fic: It's Not Me, It's You, for overthetiber

[gleefics_exch]

MOD NOTE - This was initially posted with a formatting problem I didn't catch the first time around. It couldn't be fixed by editing, and had to be deleted. Apologies to the recipient and readers!

Title: It’s Not Me, It’s You

Rating: NC-17

Pairings/Characters: Rachel/Quinn

Warnings: N/A

Word count: 5170

Disclaimer: This Glee fanfiction is based upon the

Comments

[andbless_mybaby]

First of all, writer, I apologize for not catching the formatting issues when it originally got posted. There were a few broken italics tags, but we got it all worked out before any comments were posted. ♥

I really enjoyed this! I'm not the hugest fan of femslash, but your story was so snarky and fun that I enjoyed it tremendously. Your inclusion of Puck was hilarious. I bet your mom's a total hottie. How is she? (incest, lol) and his announcement that there was enough of him to go around both made me giggle. Quinn's denial of the fact that she did, in fact, "dig chicks" - Rachel, at least! - was very IC.

I'll bet that your recipient loved this. Great job!

[disasteral_boys]

That's okay, I'm sorry I made a couple of mistakes, but thanks for getting it fixed! ♥

Thank you so much! I'm really glad you read and enjoyed it, even though you're not much of a femslash shipper :) I'm glad you thought Quinn was IC, that's something I really aim for :D

[fuzzy_paint]

So, this was pretty epic. I love Rachel's absolute unfailing insistence that Quinn likes her (at first. You go, Rachel Coco for standing up for yourself). She's like a scary puppy that won't let go of her bone and it is fantastically done.

AND THEN THEY GET LOCKED IN A CLOSET OMG. I think I died for a moment there.

"Our Unresolved Sexual Tension is off the charts. I should know; I measured it." Um. OMG, this is absolutely golden.

Puck in this had me laughing from the get-go. "I mean, any girl who doesn't wanna go out with the Puckerone must not be into guys. There's no other explanation." The ego was just fantastic. And then you gave us this: "Speaking of which, I bet your mom's a total hottie. How is she?" and I pretty much lost coherency.

Wonderful job! ♥

[disasteral_boys]

She's like a scary puppy that won't let go of her bone. Haha, that's a perfect description of her!

Thank you so much, I'm really glad you liked it (and those lines)! Your comment made me really happy ♥

[overthetiber]

OH MR. SCHUE. It is never a good idea to stick two of your students in a closet until they "work things out"! Except in this case, where it is. :D

Thanks bunches, author! This is totally sweet. <3 I'll write you some more specific feedback when I get the time.

[disasteral_boys]

Thank you! I'm especially glad you liked it <3

[abluegirl]

OMG, Puck helping Quinn hook up with Rachel IS LOVE. Seriously, I love this kind of Dynamic between Puck and Quinn.

BTW, this is so very Rachel:
"Our Unresolved Sexual Tension is off the charts. I should know; I measured it."
You have her characterization down pat.

Overall, this story was fun! I love the "locked in the closet together" trope - it is definitely cute. Well done. :)

[disasteral_boys]

Me too! I really love the idea of a Puck/Quinn friendship and it's so fun to write, too :)

Thank you so much :D

[becca_radcgg]

I'm not the biggest femslash fan either, and I really enjoyed the story. Especially your Quinn!voice. It was just wonderful. I could hear old-head-cheerio Quinn talking throughout the entire fic, and it was wonderful. Your Rachel also had plenty of moments of brilliance like measuring their ust. EPIC!

I loved the ending and how Santana was the one who found them out. Very nice inclusion of Puck and Santana in the story as well. Great job.

[disasteral_boys]

Again, I'm really happy you enjoyed the story despite not being such a femslash fan. I'm especially glad you liked my Quinn!voice ♥ Thank you :)