HSN Exchange Fic: The Path to Receiving the Love you Deserve..., for totally_loca

[gleefics_exch]

Title: The Path to Receiving the Love you Deserve in Three Simple Steps.
Rating: NC-17
Pairings/Characters: Rachel/Puck
Warnings: N/A
Word count:5031
Disclaimer:This Glee fanfiction is based upon the television show of the same name. All characters and situations other than my own are sole property of Ryan Murphy Productions and 20th Century Fox

Comments

[andbless_mybaby]

YAY YAY YAY OH YAY!

I am so proud of my beta-ee! This story amused and delighted me all over the place, and (I'm repeating myself, but seriously) your recipient will be lucky to get it.

I adored how scheming and conniving Rachel is. Her plans were so over-the-top and elaborate, which is perfectly in-character for her. Of course, your Rachel IS perfectly in-character from beginning to end, which I love like this: ♥ ♥ ♥

Kurt cuts her off at that, his face aghast and his hands clamped firmly over his ears as he tries to block the offending words.

I lol'd the first/second/third time, and I lol'd again on the re-read.

And of course, that last line! So, so perfect. She got exactly what she wants, but she's already onto the next step.

Awesome job.

[andbless_mybaby]

Thanks again for all your work:) much appreciated! ♥ ♥ ♥

And I'm so glad you enjoyed it! This story was so much fun to write!

[abluegirl]

The funny thing about this, is that I am reading it all as if narrated by Rachel herself. You have her down, and the tone is perfect.

First, I love the Clueless call out. That movie is adorable, and I like that Rachel likes it. Now that I'm reading the rest of it, all the pop culture references are adorable and perfect. &hearts ; (though I don't watch GG, so I'll have to take your word on that one).

This made me LOL:
“Make it stop,” he pleads, his expression one of abject horror as he turns to Quinn for support.
Because really, Rachel. TMI. Just, TMI.

This story was sweet and humourous in equal doses. I'd read the next one about getting Puck to propose to her, if you decided to write such a thing. :)

[abluegirl]

Thank you so much for your lovely words! I love Clueless and Rachel reminds me a little of Cher, so i couldn't resist slipping that in there. I'm really glad you enjoyed it!

Thanks again ♥ ♥ ♥

[totally_loca]

Oh this is awesome! Funny and well paced. Your writing is excellent and I loved Rachel's voice. The progression of their relationship was lovely and the end made me giggle!
Thank you so much and well done! :)

[totally_loca]

I am so glad you enjoyed it! I really had a lot of fun writing this and thanks for giving me such wonderful prompts to work with ♥ ♥ ♥

[anonymous]

This was an awesome fic.

It made me laugh so much. I also nodded my head at parts thinking that is so Rachel. lol.

[anonymous]

I am so glad you enjoyed it:) Rachel is such a wonderful character to write ♥ ♥ ♥

[fuzzy_paint]

Aww, anon, this was really sweet! I felt like Rachel was telling this straight to me; you handled her voice really well. It reminded me of a lot of reasons why I love Rachel so much. Thank you for that.

I really enjoyed this line in particular: As a sixteen-year-old young woman, however, Rachel would like to believe that she is a lot more worldly than she was in the days when seeing Jasmine and Aladdin kiss on screen was enough to send her blushing and cringing beneath the first cushion she could lay her hands on. I love the image!

And then this was just great: “He calls me his love genie, you know.” I lol'd. :D

I smiled and giggled the entire way through this! ♥

[fuzzy_paint]

I am so glad you enjoyed it:) And it makes me happy to know that I did a good job with the Rachel voice!

Thank you for taking the time to comment:) It means a lot ♥