Fic: This is Your Hometown, for needsmoregreen

Jan 12, 2012 20:28

Title: This is Your Hometown
Author: firstbreaths
Recipient: needsmoregreen
Rating: PG13+
Word Count: ~7200
Warnings: none
Summary: After helping Burt Hummel with his Congressional campaign, Artie starts to wonder if his future might be a little different to how he’s imagined it
Author's Note: This isn’t exactly future!fic, but I wanted to explore how one of these ( Read more... )

character: burt hummel, rating: pg-13, recipient: needsmoregreen, media: fanfic, author: firstbreaths, character: artie abrams

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xsaturated January 13 2012, 11:44:50 UTC


Yay I finally got a chance to actually read this and it's really, really good. I love what you chose to do with your prompt. It drives me crazy how, on the show at least, it's all or nothing for these kids; it's either get out of Lima or be a ~loser for the rest of their lives, like anything they accomplish if they stay in Lima is automatically void of any value at all. I love how you expressed Artie's conflict over that throughout the fic, especially when faced with that constant Lima Loser attitude from all of his friends. I love that it's a decision that he puts so much weight to and isn't because he ~~can't do anything else, it's because he wants to stay in Lima. Just, aaaah, I never thought I'd have so many feelings about Artie tbh. Bravo. ♥

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firstbreaths January 14 2012, 04:10:53 UTC
Dude, I never thought I would have so many feelings about Artie, and I spent six weeks writing the damn thing. But yay, thank you - as someone who currently lives in a Lima-esque town (and tbf, has a little of the "Lima Loser" attitude herself), it really frustrates me that the show doesn't present any other options.

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