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First I was happy that someone decided to fill this. Then I realized it was you and got really excited because I've loved your other stories. And then I actually read the fill, and now I'm just kinda jumping up and down and squealing. :D
I really like this little dystopia you've created. You've given them the perfect reason to marry each other with just the right ratio of free will and enforcement. And with the society basically telling everyone that sex is bad (except in marriage, but that's just a footnote printed in a really small font), Kurt's reactions feel very natural.
And of course, I love how you're handling both Blaine and Kurt here. Blaine's awakening to his feelings for Kurt was fantastic (and the wanking was the cherry on top), and it almost breaks my heart how he would do anything for him. (And really, giving Kurt his dream wedding was the least he could do! Also, I love them being so close that he actually knows what Kurt's dream wedding would be like.)
You haven't given much insight to Kurt's thoughts yet, but he feels very real and in character, too. And I really enjoy the contrast between him and Blaine on how they see their marriage. Can't wait for Blaine to make him see that they really are destined to each other.
...and when they kissed for the first time you made me want to go shred the prompt and just live happily ever after from that moment on. Oh, the things you do to me! :D
I can't wait to read more! Thank you once more for filling! This is the perfect mix of dystopia, romance, angst and sexual tension.
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