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Feb 01, 2012 09:29

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FILL, This War We're Fighting 4.6/?, Kurt/Sebastian, Homeless!Sebastian, homophobia anonymous August 22 2012, 18:50:11 UTC
It doesn’t sound like one more insult - which is good, because Kurt’s tired of them today, he freaking woke up this morning already fed up with them - it’s more like tentative teasing, and Kurt shrugs.

“What are your plans for today? Except for the homework, that is.”

“Nothing spectacular,” Kurt says cautiously. “Being at home, maybe watching something, making sure you don’t burn the house down or something, making pasta for dinner.”

“What were you going to watch?”

Kurt has no clue why Sebastian’s asking all this. But as long as it resembles a civil conversation, he’s willing to give it a shot.

He’s the good guy here, after all.

“The Sound of Music,” Kurt says. It’s true, after all. “I approve of classic things.”

‘And I like to sing along and cheer Maria on when she tries to get through to the children,’ he adds in his head. That would hardly be possible with Sebastian around, so what’s the point in mentioning it.

“Will you watch it with me?” Sebastian asks solemnly, looking like he’s asking Kurt to give half of his liver for transplantation.

Kurt would be more comfortable with giving up his liver, though.

“Erm… do you, um, do you like it too, then?”

“Please,” Sebastian rolls his eyes. “What on Earth would I be doing in a school show choir if I didn’t appreciate singing and dancing?”

Kurt snorts, feeling some of the remaining tension leaving his shoulders.

“I don’t even wanna think of it,” he says. “Something nefarious, I bet.”

“You bet, Kurrrrt,” Sebastian smirks again.

“Will watching The Sound of Music shut you up at least for while we’re at it?” he asks.

“Definitely,” Sebastian grins. “I can even promise to comment on what’s going on not more often than once every ten minutes.”

“It lasts three hours,” Kurt mutters, inclined to believe that Sebastian is the type to ruin a good movie or musical with a stream of witty comments. “Crap. Okay.”

“Okay?” Sebastian repeats.

“Yes. Whyever not, really.”

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Re: FILL, This War We're Fighting 4.6/?, Kurt/Sebastian, Homeless!Sebastian, homophobia anonymous August 22 2012, 20:05:30 UTC
Oh , I'm sorry but I am so here and reading and hanging to everyone of your words. I just suck at revewing cause I don't know what to write except amazing and beautiful and give me more.

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Re: FILL, This War We're Fighting 4.6/?, Kurt/Sebastian, Homeless!Sebastian, homophobia anonymous August 26 2012, 18:59:05 UTC
I'm so glad you still love it :) I'm perfectly alright with "amazing and beautiful and give me more", should you feel the need to say all that ))) It's just I can't know that you're here if you're silent, and updating for no one at all is really frustrating.

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Re: FILL, This War We're Fighting 4.6/?, Kurt/Sebastian, Homeless!Sebastian, homophobia anonymous August 29 2012, 21:08:06 UTC
I know you really want feedback (I remember what it was like to put things out to the void and not hear anything, and how nervewracking that could be). I'm like a lot of people - I prefer to read the entire story at once, rather than bit by bit. It's such a hard call - but I've had my heart broken (to take it to the hyperbole) more than once, when a great story is abandoned in the middle. (Also, I've seen cases where the author just didn't know when to stop, and it was turning into a soap opera, with 100,000+ words, and no end in sight. So I think, sometimes, when authors see how long it is, sometimes they trim back to just the good parts; whereas the post-as-you-go sometimes authors don't realize that they'd just putting out words that aren't really advancing the story.)

One thing that i have to say threw me for a bit of a loop was the discussion of 20 unidentified bodies in one city, and 70+ in another. Holy crap, that would be front page news across the nation. The entire state of Ohio had 50 deaths with some connection to hypothermia in 2010; Lima had 3 murders for the entire year (Columbus had 1, Westerville had 0), Cleveland had 81 for the entire year. With body on the street, presumed homeless, found dead, it's hard to say how the police with classify it (presumed natural causes is a code often assigned when the medical examiner is swamped, and no one is pushing for an autopsy; so trends sometimes get missed) ... those numbers just really took me out of the story. I live in a large city with some harsh winters (not as bad as Ohio, with the lake effect), and last year we had 5 homeless people freeze to death, between November and March. I pulled up some stats from Los Angeles, which has a pretty good survailence system, and they have an average of 1 to 2 homeless people turn up dead every day. So the thought of 20, in a single week, in a fairly small town, I was like "Omg! It's going to be a crossover with Criminal Minds!")

You're doing a lovely job, I hope geeking out about expected homeless deaths versus observed wasn't too off putting (I have worked in mortality research too long, when I have become desentitized to talking about expected dead/observed dead), I'm looking forward to reading what's to come!

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Re: FILL, This War We're Fighting 4.6/?, Kurt/Sebastian, Homeless!Sebastian, homophobia anonymous September 1 2012, 09:37:06 UTC
Oh, I hope I'm turning into one of those with endless soap-operas, it's juat sad and plain gross to read such a story :( This possibility bothers me more than the geeking out about homeless deaths ))) I guess I just didn't think that the numbers I put in the story will look overblown, I had in mind the death rate in my country which is considerably higher than in the USA in general and in a provincial Ohio town in particular. I'll make sure to edit this thing when I'm posting the chapter at ff.net, thank you for the input :) Really, thank you, I'm glad to be corrected with such things.

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Re: FILL, This War We're Fighting 4.6/?, Kurt/Sebastian, Homeless!Sebastian, homophobia anonymous September 1 2012, 09:39:31 UTC
*quick fix* "I hope I'm not turning into one of those"
Freud would be proud of me, I think ><"

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