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glass_radical

Leave You Blind

Jul 20, 2010 23:17

Title: Leave You Blind
Rating: M
Characters: Michael/Jin
Word count: 617
Summary: Michael piles up his collateral damage. Set post "Collision"
Notes: written for queen crickets at the 2010 Lost Luau at lostsquee who requested Alt-pairing: Michael/Jin.
Disclaimer: Lost ain't mine.

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look at this smutty thing i wrote, character: michael dawson, fan fiction, slash, pairing: michael/jin, lost luau 2010, character: jin kwon

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crickets July 21 2010, 03:34:22 UTC

Thank you so much for writing me something on my queenly day! And it's Michael/Jin, yay! I must say that I would never have thought that this was your first time writing slash because you've done a really nice job with the pairing. Excellent job at that!

And the way you write Michael, very heartbreaking and very real. I really have a soft spot for Michael and I really appreciate you writing him in this dark, yet somehow sympathetic light.

Lines like this are why I read fic:
The Korean word for infidelity is rather ugly, and sometimes Michael remembers how many hours its been since last he saw his child.

Perfection.

Thank you!

glass_radical July 21 2010, 03:38:38 UTC

So glad you liked it! Yeah, at first I was like 'HOW DO I SLASH' but then it was...pretty natural and um, I kind of ship it now.

It was totally my pleasure. Thank you. :D

bookwormrach July 21 2010, 03:59:19 UTC

This was interesting, particularly because I thought you got Michael's voice down really well. I'd be interested in hearing Jin's take, js. :)

glass_radical July 21 2010, 04:05:02 UTC

Awww thanks, I'm honestly so relieved that this went well, I'm not exactly a HELL YEAH SMUT kind of writer. But yeah, I'll do Jin's side really soon, because I definitely find this pairing interesting. :)

thanks for reading my fic. <3

bookwormrach July 21 2010, 04:07:06 UTC

Yeah I can understand the trepidation. I think it went off so well because you stayed true to Michael's character and just explored something different that I could imagine about the Michael/Jin relationship.

glass_radical July 21 2010, 04:09:09 UTC

I was also totally hesitant because Jin and Sun are like my LOST OTP, so imagining other pairings was weird, I was all "...this is a thing that exists?" Oh fan fic, breaking barriers every day.

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ciaimpala July 21 2010, 13:11:41 UTC

I've never been a Michael fan, but this was incredible. You made me feel sorry for him, and you made me love him. And him and Jin are an amazing, heartbreaking pairing in this.

glass_radical July 21 2010, 18:45:06 UTC

Oh wow, thank you so much. :)

nini_darko July 21 2010, 15:29:45 UTC

This is really good. Michael's charecterization is so dead on

glass_radical July 21 2010, 18:46:48 UTC

Thanks so much bb. <3

tellshannon815 July 21 2010, 21:56:34 UTC

I always like to see Michael fics, and this was a great one, totally in character!

glass_radical July 22 2010, 00:15:52 UTC

Thank you so much. :)