You Say Second Chances, I Hear Happy Endings: Part Three

Feb 10, 2009 23:53

Rating: Hard R / NC-17. There are scenes of a sexual nature in this chapter. Please only read if you are of age.
Characters: Nate/Jenny
Summary: Nate Archibald left New York and everyone in it behind years ago. He doesn't miss it. So why does he still dream about it?

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fic: story: you say happy endings, fic: characters: nate/jenny, fic: fandom: gossip girl

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jellibeen92 February 10 2009, 20:02:20 UTC
Yet another amazing update! Honestly the whole dynamic you have going on between the two is just amazing. The fact that they really haven't talked about her marriage is something because I mean sooner or later Nate is going to want answers and Jenny is going to have to give them.

I loved Blair in this chapter, Her and Chuck are just awesome!!!

Update soon!

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glass_figurine February 11 2009, 08:28:09 UTC
Thanks for all your lovely comments! They really mean a lot. And yes, they both have been avoiding the topic of her marriage, and Nate is definitely in some state of denial... that sort of thing can't last forever.

And I loved writing Blair and Chuck! Serena, on the other hand... couldn't get a handle on her. =/

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youfadesofast February 10 2009, 20:54:11 UTC
"These moments in private, tucked away from the rest of the world, where's she's just Jenny Humphrey, no disguises, are the times he loves best."

Aaaah that's such a perfect line. Keep updating =]

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glass_figurine February 11 2009, 08:29:30 UTC
That's one of my favorite lines too. =) Thanks for replying!

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middiegurl08 February 11 2009, 02:24:23 UTC
This was so good! Things are just starting to get interesting! I agree with jellibeen92, Nate is going to want answers at some point.

Awesome chapter! Post more soon! :)

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glass_figurine February 11 2009, 08:31:49 UTC
And he'll definitely get some! Whether or not he likes the answers or not, though... well, that remains to be seen *eyebrows wiggling mysteriously (which, yes, does not sound mysterious at all...)*.

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burstoflight February 11 2009, 06:40:27 UTC
OMG this was SO well written. I love how they're having this hot affair, but I can't help wondering when it's all going to catch up to them. I mean Nate's obviously falling in love with her, if he isn't already. Will Jenny leave her husband for her? Will people find out they're having an affair? What will happen? I love how there's a little mystery here. It just makes it that much more interesting and complex. Nate/Jenny have never made it easy and this is definitely holding true to them.

On a shallow note, that sex scene was HOT! More please! LOL!

Update soon! :)

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glass_figurine February 11 2009, 08:45:26 UTC
LOL! I love the idea of them having a hot affair as well! And I'm glad you thought the sex was hot, because that's probably the first time I wrote any real smut... most other times it has some ulterior motive, or is all... fade to the window, soap opera style! I'm planning another sexcapade for them, but can't decide how it should happen... sexy librarian, maybe?

As for what's going to happen re: their relationship... Nate is kind of in denial about the whole marriage thing, for the moment, because I think he's kind of a passive character. He doesn't really take action that changes the status quo until something forces him to, until he or his relationship feels threatened, and for the most part, he's been able to pretend that Jenny's husband is this Hugh Hefner style dude (typed "dud" first, which is what Nate thinks too!) who's going to keel over any minute anyway, but now that he knows differently? He's stewing over it, and somethings gotta change.

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burstoflight February 11 2009, 08:53:09 UTC
What about teacher/student? LOL

Seriously, Nate is a passive character. He takes the easy way out nearly every single time. It would be interesting to see him fight for something and be absolute certain about what he wants. Unfortunately, he seems like he's also the type to make ultimatums, but I hope he doesn't do that.

Who's going to find out first? Chuck or Blair?

Oh and what's the other thing they don't talk about? It was said that they don't talk about two things and Jenny's marriage was one. What's the other?

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force_oblique February 23 2009, 18:38:11 UTC
OMFG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
So hot!!!
And every character is so wonderful!! <333
i am loving this!

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