Long way from Conway (27 part 1/?)unpublicguyOctober 25 2010, 00:40:42 UTC
before I comment on the bad stuff that you put in this chapter, might as well I start comment on the happy stuff first....
so I desperately wish that I can transfer to Ben school right now and be his classmate, his lunch friend, his all stuffs since he still don't has any companion for now.(LOL) *make my wish come true, writer...LOL...you're the fairy in this story anyway....*
"Lunch next," Ben said with a funny grin on his face. He isn't that bad when he's not trying to plot to kill you, Kris thought to himself as he looked at the next period. - HOLD ON! are you just staring at MY Ben??? (since when Ben is mine? LOL. I don't know)....put your sight on your man mister, Ben is mine.lalalala~
Ben doing an acoustic version of Whole Lotta Love? is that mean Ben can play guitar? from what I know acoustic is in two form, either guitar or piano... :D
so Ben's father is a police officer....so that's why Ben has six pack in his abs (like having a police office as a father and six pack abs has any relation ...lol)
*cracking knuckle* and now on the bad stuff....*growl* thank god I comment on the happy stuff. if not I probably will yell at you on and on and on about this.
seriously? sexual abuse on our Kris? OUR KRIS? don't you think that a little too much? and I don't even want to think if Crystal really going to have a Kris baby later on.
either way....hey Crystal...since you already get what you want (I mean the SEX), how does it felt to you? good ? amazing? superb?
just put this info to your little mind, he more enjoy doing it with Adam. yes, Adam fucking Lambert. too bad Kris is not even arousal with you around. probably he thinks of you as Adam while he's doing it.
Why do I feel like Adam did after the AMA's? :PglambertrockOctober 25 2010, 20:05:01 UTC
Okay, before I go on to address your little rant, I'd like to say thanks for being an awesome reader and commenting even after I put some drama (ooooooooooooooh so flippin scary -_-) into a story. I'm getting pay back for me hurting Kris because all day his voice has been in my head going "why did you do that?". ALL DAY lol. I just hate how some people will stray from the drama (you and saar are the only guys who have commented so far and I'm going through this whole 'see, that's what happens when you write stuff that isn't fluffy and happy' right now that I hate. Any help or advice? lol Just, thanks for commenting and being awesome =)
{takes sip of coke} Okay, now on to your comments.
lol I could make a person that he could meet and become BFF's with. LOL just give me the word and how you want him to be! =)
ROFL YOUR Ben will stay yours =) Kris meant that as a friendly way, not an 'OH MY GOSH HE'S SO HOT' kind of way :P lol
Yes it does mean Ben can play guitar =) You'll have to wait and see =)
Yup =) lol I don't think they are related because if abs were then all those fat police officers are REALLY breaking some genetic code or something LOL =P
{hides deeper into hole} Oh Lord. 0.o
Well..........it's all in my big master plan of how the story will go! You know how I never let things stay bad. I always bring something good to the table when something like this happens. Bad times bring people closer together. This is gonna' really bring the boys even closer. Sometimes you have to be humbled to really know what you have. (Which, btw, means Adam's really gonna be loving on Kris a lot soon =)) Besides, if I keep it all happy ALL THE TIME, there would be no real need to go on and have a bigger storyline. It'd also would seem really un-realistic. Maybe I did go too far, I guess, but Crystal isn't some lady who's gonna put poison in and apple and make you fall asleep! I just am trying to make it seem realistic. {sighs} I'm not yelling or trying to make the story sad as heck, I'm just trying my hardest to make it real and for it to last. (All lovey-dovey stuff will just make it seem like there's no point in continuing, ya' know? *sigh* I need a vacation lol)
-BTW, I WON'T let that happen lol
Idk how the hell it felt to her LOL :P She has her own perverted mind :P
And I agree with your last statement!
Well, I guess you can see my frustration :P I'm gonna stop this long as heck comment and go back to my HAPPY drabble I've been starting to write. Thanks for being a trooper and sticking around =) You and saar are my fave commentators!!!!!!!! =D
Re: I seem to be today, huh? lolglambertrockOctober 25 2010, 23:49:02 UTC
Glad about that one =) LOL ur too funny :P
{makes brain start working} lol can't wait to work a BFF for Ben into the situation :P
Of course! {lol 'The Super Heroes in Alliance to Protect Kradam' =D)
Haha Scared you've got some competition? LOL Kris will be a good boy =)
=) Indeed it will! 0.0
LOL I'm sure if you paid him enough or something he would just stand there so you can be all googly eyes at him. I mean, he worked for Crystal for free! :P LOL
-_- dang LOL but I want to go to Hawaii with Adam and the gang!!!!!!!!!!!!
lol I'm not that cruel :P
I bet and EWWWWWW I don't even want to think of a mental picture for that! :P
Eh, well, I'll make it happen somehow. I am hoping to get back at Crystal and her idiot henchman in part 2, so...yeah. Kris is, but you'll find out Adam's very understanding. He's gonna learn how to tone his sexiness down and all that for Kris. Really, he's gonna be Kris's prince charming out of all this. As I said, I'll make things better.
I'm pretty sure he wouldn't, considering he's gonna be understanding, but he may get a little frustrated at times. All I know is that they will get through this. And heck, I'm gonna try my hardest to make them turn out happy together =)
You can go to Hawaii with one condition......?unpublicguyOctober 26 2010, 00:03:25 UTC
*already do 2 long comments in one fics, so I will put it short for this..LOL*
LMAO~ if The Super Heroes in Alliance to Protect Kradam is going to exist, am so going to start find super hero costume for them to wear, later on.
competition? meh~ am better than Kris (which clearly am not, that's why am freaking out with Kris action...LOL)
eh~ I need to pay first? *checking my wallet, and only find a golden ring* well, if I propose to you (Benny, not writer..LOL) to be my bf (boyfriend, best friend, whatever you want to call it..:p) will you agree on it Benny? lalalala~ :D
yes, that's what am afraid of that going to happen to Kradam, rejection. just don't make Adam an ass. Kris already suffer enough and Adam being an ass definitely not going to help. LOL
guess, Adam need to cancel his Love Game song later on. too bad ~
LOL... I guess you can go to Hawaii...just as long as you will keep the story update, then I will not mind you going to anywhere with Adam. :p
Re: You can go to Hawaii with one condition......?glambertrockOctober 26 2010, 00:44:23 UTC
lol you'll be the first person I come up to to ask for designs :P
ROFL :P
LOL too funny :P I haven't even written a character of you into the story yet and you already are marrying the guy? :p
Don't worry, I'm gonna go easy on Krissifer to dig me out of my ditch :P I'm making Adam a good boy for a while. He needs it =) Besides, I've got something sweet planned =)
LOL he'll get to that eventually. You'll see. :P
YAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAY {packs bags and flies to Adam} YAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAY
Re: You can go to Hawaii with one condition......?unpublicguyOctober 26 2010, 01:38:40 UTC
LOL... IKR...am ROFL when I read your reaction to my proposal. LOL. maybe you can change it into Benny actually already has a secret husband or something..LOL...joking..joking...
that's pretty fast! well, guess am going to post my cold coke & chocolate cake to you then.LOL *pack & post the cold coke & chocolate cake*
don't forget to post the picture of you and Adam!!!...LOL
You're Are SO Drama Queen...ROFLunpublicguyOctober 25 2010, 23:37:04 UTC
my advice : keep going with your evil plot writer.
weird right? but well, at least am bursting it on you. so that's a good sign. we need to communicate. stay quiet while you are angry is not a good sign. LOL. staying away from your story because of evil plot involving Kradam is more worst. LOL.
well, regarding Ben BFF....well, I would love to put my name for that (LOL), but it's okay. I leave it to you. an awesome guy like Ben (what's not awesome about him? six packs, baby blue eyes, putting shit right on Crystal face...LOL)should have awesome companies too.
maybe later on they can be a part of our Kradam allies just like Brad and Alli. :D (why it sounds like am trying to make a new super hero team or something...LOL)
LOL.... I hope so Kris. just don't stare too long. I still remember the last time you're drooling over Ben because you stare too long on him (referring to the part where Ben came to their table during lunch and Ben ask whether he can sit on the same table with them. :p)
a~ Whole Lotta Love guitar version? can't wait for that then. LOL
ROFL.... you're right. those fat policeman definitely breaking the genetic code. well, seems like Ben already qualified for jobs like police officer or army or he can just stand there and mesmerize me... *faint happily*...LOL
WAAAAIIIIIITTTTTT! no vacation for you missy. lol~ vacation means no Kradam and more horrible no Ben. *sob**sob*
well, that's a good news. at least Crystal not going to have Kris baby later on. :D
LMAO~ Crystal sure is pervert girl. I mean she probably already fantasize something when she and Kris were dating back then. that's why she desperately want to know what Kris package is.
yes...you are right. bad incident brings people more closer, but am not sure whether that theory can be applied for sexual abuse situation. Kris still traumatic with the incident (which means Adam cannot use his sexual tone anymore. sexual tone == Crystal and the loon)
hopefully, Adam not burst out if he keeps getting rejection from Kris. it's frustration if we keep get a NO sign from people who we love every time we want to show how much we care for them.
and jsyk, am not a fan of 24/7 happy, fun people either. well, Kradam being all cute and happy is good. but if it is too much, then *yawn*. NEXT! lol
so I desperately wish that I can transfer to Ben school right now and be his classmate, his lunch friend, his all stuffs since he still don't has any companion for now.(LOL) *make my wish come true, writer...LOL...you're the fairy in this story anyway....*
"Lunch next," Ben said with a funny grin on his face. He isn't that bad when he's not trying to plot to kill you, Kris thought to himself as he looked at the next period.
- HOLD ON! are you just staring at MY Ben??? (since when Ben is mine? LOL. I don't know)....put your sight on your man mister, Ben is mine.lalalala~
Ben doing an acoustic version of Whole Lotta Love? is that mean Ben can play guitar? from what I know acoustic is in two form, either guitar or piano... :D
so Ben's father is a police officer....so that's why Ben has six pack in his abs (like having a police office as a father and six pack abs has any relation ...lol)
*cracking knuckle* and now on the bad stuff....*growl*
thank god I comment on the happy stuff. if not I probably will yell at you on and on and on about this.
seriously? sexual abuse on our Kris? OUR KRIS? don't you think that a little too much?
and I don't even want to think if Crystal really going to have a Kris baby later on.
either way....hey Crystal...since you already get what you want (I mean the SEX), how does it felt to you? good ? amazing? superb?
just put this info to your little mind, he more enjoy doing it with Adam. yes, Adam fucking Lambert. too bad Kris is not even arousal with you around. probably he thinks of you as Adam while he's doing it.
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{takes sip of coke} Okay, now on to your comments.
lol I could make a person that he could meet and become BFF's with. LOL just give me the word and how you want him to be! =)
ROFL YOUR Ben will stay yours =) Kris meant that as a friendly way, not an 'OH MY GOSH HE'S SO HOT' kind of way :P lol
Yes it does mean Ben can play guitar =) You'll have to wait and see =)
Yup =) lol I don't think they are related because if abs were then all those fat police officers are REALLY breaking some genetic code or something LOL =P
{hides deeper into hole} Oh Lord.
0.o
Well..........it's all in my big master plan of how the story will go! You know how I never let things stay bad. I always bring something good to the table when something like this happens. Bad times bring people closer together. This is gonna' really bring the boys even closer. Sometimes you have to be humbled to really know what you have. (Which, btw, means Adam's really gonna be loving on Kris a lot soon =)) Besides, if I keep it all happy ALL THE TIME, there would be no real need to go on and have a bigger storyline. It'd also would seem really un-realistic. Maybe I did go too far, I guess, but Crystal isn't some lady who's gonna put poison in and apple and make you fall asleep! I just am trying to make it seem realistic. {sighs} I'm not yelling or trying to make the story sad as heck, I'm just trying my hardest to make it real and for it to last. (All lovey-dovey stuff will just make it seem like there's no point in continuing, ya' know? *sigh* I need a vacation lol)
-BTW, I WON'T let that happen lol
Idk how the hell it felt to her LOL :P She has her own perverted mind :P
And I agree with your last statement!
Well, I guess you can see my frustration :P I'm gonna stop this long as heck comment and go back to my HAPPY drabble I've been starting to write. Thanks for being a trooper and sticking around =) You and saar are my fave commentators!!!!!!!! =D
Thanks =)
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{makes brain start working} lol can't wait to work a BFF for Ben into the situation :P
Of course! {lol 'The Super Heroes in Alliance to Protect Kradam' =D)
Haha Scared you've got some competition? LOL Kris will be a good boy =)
=) Indeed it will! 0.0
LOL I'm sure if you paid him enough or something he would just stand there so you can be all googly eyes at him. I mean, he worked for Crystal for free! :P LOL
-_- dang LOL but I want to go to Hawaii with Adam and the gang!!!!!!!!!!!!
lol I'm not that cruel :P
I bet and EWWWWWW I don't even want to think of a mental picture for that! :P
Eh, well, I'll make it happen somehow. I am hoping to get back at Crystal and her idiot henchman in part 2, so...yeah.
Kris is, but you'll find out Adam's very understanding. He's gonna learn how to tone his sexiness down and all that for Kris. Really, he's gonna be Kris's prince charming out of all this. As I said, I'll make things better.
I'm pretty sure he wouldn't, considering he's gonna be understanding, but he may get a little frustrated at times. All I know is that they will get through this. And heck, I'm gonna try my hardest to make them turn out happy together =)
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LMAO~ if The Super Heroes in Alliance to Protect Kradam is going to exist, am so going to start find super hero costume for them to wear, later on.
competition? meh~ am better than Kris (which clearly am not, that's why am freaking out with Kris action...LOL)
eh~ I need to pay first? *checking my wallet, and only find a golden ring* well, if I propose to you (Benny, not writer..LOL) to be my bf (boyfriend, best friend, whatever you want to call it..:p) will you agree on it Benny? lalalala~ :D
yes, that's what am afraid of that going to happen to Kradam, rejection. just don't make Adam an ass. Kris already suffer enough and Adam being an ass definitely not going to help. LOL
guess, Adam need to cancel his Love Game song later on. too bad ~
LOL... I guess you can go to Hawaii...just as long as you will keep the story update, then I will not mind you going to anywhere with Adam. :p
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ROFL :P
LOL too funny :P I haven't even written a character of you into the story yet and you already are marrying the guy? :p
Don't worry, I'm gonna go easy on Krissifer to dig me out of my ditch :P I'm making Adam a good boy for a while. He needs it =) Besides, I've got something sweet planned =)
LOL he'll get to that eventually. You'll see. :P
YAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAY {packs bags and flies to Adam} YAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAY
LOL :P
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that's pretty fast! well, guess am going to post my cold coke & chocolate cake to you then.LOL
*pack & post the cold coke & chocolate cake*
don't forget to post the picture of you and Adam!!!...LOL
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my advice : keep going with your evil plot writer.
weird right? but well, at least am bursting it on you. so that's a good sign. we need to communicate. stay quiet while you are angry is not a good sign. LOL. staying away from your story because of evil plot involving Kradam is more worst. LOL.
well, regarding Ben BFF....well, I would love to put my name for that (LOL), but it's okay. I leave it to you. an awesome guy like Ben (what's not awesome about him? six packs, baby blue eyes, putting shit right on Crystal face...LOL)should have awesome companies too.
maybe later on they can be a part of our Kradam allies just like Brad and Alli. :D (why it sounds like am trying to make a new super hero team or something...LOL)
LOL.... I hope so Kris. just don't stare too long. I still remember the last time you're drooling over Ben because you stare too long on him
(referring to the part where Ben came to their table during lunch and Ben ask whether he can sit on the same table with them. :p)
a~ Whole Lotta Love guitar version? can't wait for that then. LOL
ROFL.... you're right. those fat policeman definitely breaking the genetic code. well, seems like Ben already qualified for jobs like police officer or army or he can just stand there and mesmerize me... *faint happily*...LOL
WAAAAIIIIIITTTTTT! no vacation for you missy. lol~
vacation means no Kradam and more horrible no Ben. *sob**sob*
well, that's a good news. at least Crystal not going to have Kris baby later on. :D
LMAO~ Crystal sure is pervert girl. I mean she probably already fantasize something when she and Kris were dating back then. that's why she desperately want to know what Kris package is.
yes...you are right. bad incident brings people more closer, but am not sure whether that theory can be applied for sexual abuse situation.
Kris still traumatic with the incident (which means Adam cannot use his sexual tone anymore. sexual tone == Crystal and the loon)
hopefully, Adam not burst out if he keeps getting rejection from Kris. it's frustration if we keep get a NO sign from people who we love every time we want to show how much we care for them.
and jsyk, am not a fan of 24/7 happy, fun people either. well, Kradam being all cute and happy is good. but if it is too much, then *yawn*. NEXT! lol
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