PWO reviews that made me so happy I cried D:
Lonepichu,
A new review/comment has been submitted to your story.
Story: Pokemon World Online
Chapter: 58. Apocalypse
From: Yera-roo ()
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Considering this might be my last chance to leave a review before the story
ends, I have a few things to say.
First: The concept of Pokemon World Online is a brilliant one - realistic
enough that for the first ten (or so) chapters I actually thought it was a
real game (and apparently Microsoft is making a virtual reality helmet, so
this concept might become reality soon...)
Second: You obviously have a knack for writing. Your character development is
subtle yet important, your scene setting is good without dwelling on details,
and the dialogue is fantastic. I applaud you for developing so many original
characters without losing sight of any of them.
Third: I don't regret spending many hours to read all 58 chapters. This has
truly been epic. Good work.