Dance Hall: sephirothflame

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Title: On a new shoreline
Author: sephirothflame
Rating: R
Pairing: Brad Colbert x Nate Fick
Word Count: 7,300~
Summary: Nate never joined the Marine Corps. He works two jobs, one as a hotass waiter at a local bar where he meets Brad, and one as a popular fiction writer. Brad is a Marine though, and Marines get deployed, and Brad has to go, even if it means

Comments

[kari_hermione]

Oh BB! I really, really like this. They get a puppy! :D

[sansdatelimite]

Thank you, BB! And this is me. Are you really surprised in any way that they got a dog? :P

[janes_thomas]

the way you told the story here is fantastic. i am such a sucker for domestic brad/nate.

and i love the way ray brings waiter mcHotass right to brad's door!

[sansdatelimite]

Man oh man, domestic fic is my happy place. I live for it. And Brad/Nate just makes it better. ♥

Ray was just looking out for Brad's best interests! ;D

Thank you for the comment & I'm glad you enjoyed. :)

[sansdatelimite]

Eee ♥! Yes. The boys. Brad takes his time, but he gets that Nate isn't going anywhere anytime soon soon enough. ♥

Thank you for the comment & I'm glad you enjoyed.

[glitterglam13]

This was wonderful. Loved the structure, how romantic it was and the little domestic moments between them.

[sansdatelimite]

This fic is totally my self-indulgent baby. ♥ I'm really glad you enjoyed and thanks for the comment. :)

[nightanddaze]

This is so good I totally borked my first comment! Hahaha, whoops!

Anyway, this is so sweet and I love the form you used to tell the story. Awesome work!

[sansdatelimite]

Ahaha, oops? I'm sorry to hear that. I mean, I'm glad you liked it, very much so. :)

I fretted for days on whether I made the right decision to write it this way. It's nice to know it worked.

Thank you! ♥