Fic: The reign of fluff [Avatar: the Last Airbender] [2/5]

[girlupnorth]

Author: girlupnorth
Title: The reign of fluff
Fandom: Avatar: the Last Airbender
Spoilers: Post-series
Rating: NC-17 for porn
Length: ~6.740 words in this part

Contains: pregnancies. Fluff. Crack. Marital sexuashun of f/f, m/f, and m/f/f variety. Marital sexuashun while (very) pregnant. Threesome(s). (Veiled) allusions to incest. More fluff.

Comments

[pellamerethiel]

This chapter is fantastic! :D I loved all the sex scenes and the fact that all characters sound very true and plausible to me :D I especially adore your Mai and Toph, they sound so canonical to me - and uncle Iroh <333 And you've mentioned Azula a couple of times, yay for that! :D I loved also the duel between Zuko and Toph, Sokka's big family and the fact that all/most of the maids in the palace are lesbians. ;DDD Adorable.

The moment in which Mai feels her baby fluttering and Katara listens into herself and hears the baby's heartbeat... awesome. *__*

Very fluffy chapter, but we have also some angst to counterbalance it - would Katara's baby prove to be a firebender? Or waterbender? ;)

Enjoyed reading this whole chapter :D

“Is it just me, or are you treating me like a piece of meat?” he asked.

“It is just you,” Mai assured him.

“But we love you anyway,” Katara said.

“I sure hope so,” Zuko sighed.
Awww! :D Very canon in my opinion ;).

at this hour he needed more time - or at least, bloodbending help from Katara
Brilliant idea!!!!11

“You’re not pregnant, are you? I mean, I wouldn’t put it past Ty Lee’s acrobatic abilities...”

Sokka choked. Suki giggled.
Heeee XDDD Mpreg jokes are always welcome! <3

“It’s rude to interrupt people before they come,” she said sternly, and then also broke off in giggles.
Mai <3

“Yeah... right. Pregnancy’s completely gross,” Toph announced. “Maybe not as gross as men, but still.”
Heee XD I love Toph and her snarky, always prominent comments.

“How do you know which of them are lesbian?” Zuko asked suspiciously. Mai and Katara shared a look.

“It might have been a hiring requirement, so to speak,” Mai ventured finally.
LOVING IT. XD

“He creeped me out,” Mai replied. “Even by himself. And then there was the bear. I mean... A bear. I don’t even want to know.”
Fantastic XD

Mai sighed deeply. “This is so pathetic,” she said. “I’m so glad you’re not like him, Zuko.”

“I didn’t really have a choice,” Zuko said, thinking about Azula.
*___*

[girlupnorth]

I would like to state for the record that the idea behind lesbian maids is that Mai and Katara wouldn't trust straight girls not to molest Zuko, rather than that they find Zuko untrustworthy ;)

Thank you for the comment, very glad you're enjoying :) There will be more of Azula in the chapters to come ;D