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The Small Places 2/2

Apr 11, 2006 01:22

Title: The Small Places
Author: girlpire
Pairing: Spangel (Spike/Angel)
Summary: After an unfortunate battle with a demon, which resulted in his needing hand reattachment surgery, Angel is confined to his Wolfram and Hart apartment while he recovers. With help from the only other person who can really understand what he's going through, Angel begins to re- ( Read more... )

spike, angel, fic

Comments 126

woman_of_ April 11 2006, 06:06:59 UTC

Like Angel, you made this story beautiful, and the manips as well. Lovely

girlpire April 12 2006, 00:56:10 UTC

thank you. :)

spankspike April 11 2006, 06:43:18 UTC

I think you did an excellent job with the porn!!

It was actually less porny than it was a slowly unfolding erotic scene. The use of the photography with Spike slowly undressing and Angel's response to that - and then Spike responding to Angel. It was very subtle and very, very hot!!

"You're like the cactus," Angel softly explained. "Constant. Unchanging. Beautiful. But it makes me wonder, what good is beauty that lasts forever if people don't... if I don't ever stop to appreciate it?" Angel glanced down at the drawing. "I wish I had looked at you more back then," he said. "I thought maybe... last night would make up for it a little..."

Spike looked at the drawing and each of the photos again. He didn't say anything.

Angel nudged him. "You can talk now, remember?"I loved this part. It made me draw a little breath, because it reflected that something had changed between them. Spike fully able to talk, but unable - and Angel quietly begging for the words after spending so long wishing for his silence ( ... )

girlpire April 12 2006, 01:00:31 UTC

thanks! i'm glad you liked that part. i had originally only kept spike quiet so i wouldn't have to attempt his accent, but then i felt sort of obligated to lift it into actual meaning, since it was such a major part of the story.

altyronsmaker April 11 2006, 06:46:56 UTC

I think this is my absolute favorite Spangel EVER written.

I have no other words than that.

girlpire April 12 2006, 01:16:30 UTC

dude! thanks. :D
that's the nicest thing anyone has ever said to me... *sniffle*

spikes_heart April 11 2006, 06:55:18 UTC

Gorgeous.

girlpire April 12 2006, 01:33:42 UTC

thank you. :)

denied_heaven April 11 2006, 07:40:34 UTC

this was breathtaking.. just gorgeous in every word
perfect *sigh*

girlpire April 12 2006, 01:34:47 UTC

thanks so much. :D