Between Two Lungs, Chapter 1: Ghost in the Genes

May 29, 2010 22:56

Author: girlnotorious
Rating: Current PG-13, to be R
Summary: Steve Rogers was the rediscovery of the century, thrown unceremoniously into a broken billionaire’s destructive loop. Through impossible adversity, with the steadfast ally he never knew he needed at his side, Tony Stark finally learns how to kick the habit and ditch the middle man. 
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stevetony, avengers, between two lungs, marvel

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lucife May 30 2010, 09:17:17 UTC
I liked it a lot!
If you don't mind a bit of concrit, Immediately Post Iron Man 2 throws me a bit out of story, it's clear from the context that it's after Iron Man 2, so you don't have to mention it specifically.
Also, Stane, not Stain and Romanoff, not Romanov.
Other than that I've been dying for an epic set after Iron Man 2 ever since I've seen it! I hope you'll keep on writing!
and I cheered at the sneaky Sherlock Holmes reference! :)

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autumn_lily May 30 2010, 23:57:06 UTC
and Romanoff, not Romanov

Natalia Alianovna Romanova is the Black Widow's actual name. Natasha Romanoff is one of the alias' she's gone by over the years. Romanov could really just be a typo error.

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girlnotorious June 1 2010, 04:18:23 UTC
Fixed everything, thanks so much!

PS: YOUR ICON. *Swoon*

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autumn_lily June 2 2010, 02:13:52 UTC
Jason Todd is just one of Batman's several awesomely HOT sidekicks ;)

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girlnotorious June 3 2010, 02:46:04 UTC
I'll forever be a Dick fan, but TOTALLY sympathize on the Jason front. :D

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