FIC: Naughts and Crosses [Sam/Dean; NC 17]

[girlguidejones]

Title:  Naughts and Crosses
Author:  girlguidejones 
Rating | pairing:  NC17; Sam/Dean.  3400 words.
Disclaimer:  All characters belong to Eric Kripke and the CW.  No profit made; no copyright infringement intended.
Author’s notes:  My first foray into the amazing Every Broken Thing/Heart ‘verse, findable  here and highly recommended.  A while back, poisontaster  wrote this.

Comments

[poisontaster]

OMG, IT'S LIKE YOU WERE THERE! *laughs* Though, my story did not have NEARLY this much sex. Sadly. But you have more than compensated for it (in the BEST way).

I love the idea that Sam smells Dean's pillow. It's such a small, intimate thing.

When you mentioned pancakes...I was hoping they were chocolate chip! Aw, you really DO love me! *beams* And I LOVE the story of Dean and his sekrit chocolate sauce. I bet the pancakes isn't the only thing he uses it for. :) Also, Mike having a spreadsheet of his attempts to find it is MADE OF WIN. He totally does!

I also really love...okay, I love the whole idea of Dean making Sam all his favorite stuff, but I REALLY love the idea that Dean gives Sam all his peppers. Again, it's one of those really small details, but it's the kind of stuff that people DO when they've been together so long.

I mean, accidental knitting needle? Really? I have to warn you for that?God, don't even get me started

[girlguidejones]

Wheeeeee! I'm thrilled that you like this...I really wanted to make something special for you, and, well, what's more special than re-writing your own domestic bliss as Sam/Dean schmooporn, am I right?

*L*

Dean velcro-ing lube is possibly my favorite part. Every once in a while I stumble onto something and think "OMG. How has no one thought of this yet? Can I be first? Can I?" Dean's hidden lube stash is one of these.

I think my favorite bits were the references to Mike. I love him desperately in this 'verse, and it was fun to actually make him a third, unseen, but still-present character.

Anyhoo...thanks for such thoughtful, detail-noticing feedback. It warms me to my toes! :)

And again, happy birthday!

[strgazr04]

Is it weird that I'm more obsessed with the idea of Dean knitting than anything else in this fic? Now I need to go prompt this at storyfinders. So much for 'oh I know it's 4am but I'll just read this one last fic..." XD

[essenceofmeanin]

DUDE. i'm not normally a curtain!fic reader -- and this was curtains turned up to 11, this was PANCAKE fic for crissake -- but this was awesome. dean knits (he totally does), they have hot sex, and then this: Sam grins, raising up to wink at Dean. “But for the second time in less than twenty-four hours, I used eight inches of hard steel to shut something up.”

yup. i love you.

[girlguidejones]

Pancakes FTW! Hee. I'm glad you squashed down your curtain-phobia for me! *hugs*

[essenceofmeanin]

oh dude, you wrote me a john/dean remix. curtains are the LEAST i can do! ;)

[girlguidejones]

Seriously? You mean, I could still be cashing in on that? (hee.)

[brynwulf]

I think you win the Best Line Ever aware for that eight inches of hard steel sentence. ROFL!! That just made me grin from ear to ear and be so proud I knew you.

The whole thing rocked and like I said last night..."LUCKY ERIN" ... and lucky us.

[girlguidejones]

Sam's stealing Dean's lines! :) Thanks so much for your help, baby!

[rejeneration]

OH MY GOD. OMG ... OM -laughs so hard she's crying- Honey. This is so remarkable. This is SO HILARIOUS. And so HOT. And just... OH GOD. I'm at work and I'm grinning like I just won the lottery and I'm so afraid because someone is going to come by in a hot second and ask me what the hell this LOOK is for and it's not like I can tell them I've just BEEN THROUGH SOMETHING... this -waves hands- WHEW. I'm not ready to release this high, yet, but DAMN GIRL! This is just all kinds of wonderful. MUSTTTTT BE READ.

And wow, I don't know if poisontaster's birthday is today or not, but either way, HAPPY BIRTHDAY. I feel like it's MINE! (which, you know, -elbows- February -cough-)

[girlguidejones]

I am thrilled to have caused so many and varied reactions! Hee. I am SO glad I don't have internet at work. Pr0n reading would be a HUGE problem. Heh.

And, btw...thank you for your lovely rec. I really appreciate it.

[tabaqui]

Ooooooooh, what fun, what fun. I love the back-and-forth bicker/banter of long-time partners. I love the intimacy and affection all wrapped up in gruffness.

I love Velcroe'd lube and spreadsheets.

Wheeee!

[girlguidejones]

I'm really glad the partner-bicker vibe came through. It was one of the things PT said she wanted...established future fic where they're schmoopy and happy.

:)

Thank you!