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Five Times Sam Had His Hair Pulled Back (R, Sam/Dean)

Feb 28, 2008 23:47

Title: Five times Sam had his hair pulled back
Author: girlguidejones
Rating/Pairing: R | Sam/Dean | 3000 words | Teensy, AU-ish reference to 3.11
Notes: Months ago, plutogirl10 said she wanted: ”To see Sam with his hair pulled back in a ponytail, tied with a piece of leather, holding a knife between his teeth and being all lethal and feral. Edged in steel." I know ( Read more... )

my fic

Comments 42

essenceofmeanin February 29 2008, 07:59:55 UTC

whoo! does it feel good to have it done?

still love it. my favorite part is the 'by john' part... i love the complicated family dynamics you captured so very well here. (and also rambo!sammy at the end. like the changes, much more understandable.)

girlguidejones March 1 2008, 19:07:41 UTC

I have you and Meg to thank for it getting done *right*!

The John part is my fave too.

Thank you again!

deirdre_c February 29 2008, 08:48:57 UTC

Fantastic, hon! I love the wee!boys one so much (last summer the neighbor girl had all the boys on the street done up in crazy hairdos--mohawks and horns and 007esque-- with gel and water from the hose. *glee*)! And the tenderness in the John one made my heart swell six sizes. All of them are terrific. Thanks for sharing. ♥

girlguidejones March 1 2008, 19:09:43 UTC

The boys are smishable in any incarnation, aren't they?

*may or may not have been one of those little girls who did the boys' hair* *looks shifty*

brynwulf March 1 2008, 11:31:31 UTC

A thousand times yes! You just had to use vitae, huh? *snicker* I like the way you fixed it. And I agree, the final scene is so much more clear now, I really like it.

I think this might be the first Five Times... story I've really really enjoyed.

girlguidejones March 1 2008, 19:11:15 UTC

I couldn't give it up! *L*

Thank you so much for your help. It is a much better story because of you!

thehighwaywoman March 1 2008, 20:13:46 UTC

Love this. Five times fics are my favorites, and a fic about Sammy's hair -- well, yeah. I especially enjoyed the family dynamics in this -- John was terrific. And the last one? *pleasant shivers*

girlguidejones March 2 2008, 04:31:12 UTC

Yes! Five times...about Sammy's hair? I can't believe it hasn't already been DONE, it seems so obvious! *L*

I love John...(that was my favorite).

Thanks for the lovely feedback!

delphinapterus March 1 2008, 23:50:55 UTC

Wonderful. I love how John is considerate under his worry and Dean's descriptions of dirt were excellent.

girlguidejones March 2 2008, 04:34:50 UTC

I'm glad you liked Dean's take on dirt. It was really fun to write. :)

Thanks for taking a moment to comment...I really appreciate it!