Tree Covered With Dew

Jul 04, 2012 05:43



Title: Tree Covered With Dew
Author: girldevil
Pairing: Yoosu
Genre: Angst, Romance
Rating: PG
Length: one-shot
Summary: This is sort of a song-fic of the same title. Just how long can you stay in love with your best friend?

A/N: If you can, listen to Junsu's song while reading and make sure you have a box of tissue ready. ^.^

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fic: tree covered in dew, yoosu

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anyalabyuri July 3 2012, 21:42:11 UTC
wow welcome back!
hope you're fully recovered from your surgery.

nice try doing an angst one but it still ended up fluffy as hell. well, you're THE fluffmaster after all.

and why is su stealing lines from park ha? :P

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girldevil July 4 2012, 17:34:12 UTC
Yay ninja! Haha thank you!

Of course, I'll always be the fluff master forever! I don't know if someone can beat me <-yabang mode hahaha!

Ehh..Sometimes I like to imagine that Pak Ha is Junsu in the drama =D

Thank you as always!

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psychokatal July 3 2012, 21:43:48 UTC
Spot~
I STILL HAVE to tidy up my apartment afer all :P

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psychokatal July 4 2012, 16:07:26 UTC
I probably wouldn't even tell him about my affections, if he has a different partner every week Ô,o

‘Tell me again, why did I fall in love with him?’ ~ どうして君を好きになってしまったんだろう

<>
He was able to think this rational when he was in elementary school? xD Mature JS!

<> mhm.. maybe switch 'tight' and 'like that' ?

<> did you mean 'I can't'?

<> red ballon my ass :P Got the message ^_~ why aren't they wearing any costums?^^

Why did JS never tell his friends about migrating? Ô,o

mhm.. maybe you could put some spaces between scene/time changes? Like for me the last sentece was YC breaking down after JS left and the next sentence he was an adult^^

wow... didn't see the end coming Ô,o
That was.. fast xD and definitely didn't feel like 14 pages^^

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girldevil July 4 2012, 17:37:25 UTC
Thank you for the spotted mistakes, LJ was messed up and it took me a lot of takes to reedit and everything.

Sometimes friend don't want to let his/her friend to know about migrating because of varied reason. It can be either that it's too painful, hate goodbyes, and so on. I have a friend who just left without letting us know, selfishly just like that so maybe Junsu wants to be selfish for once when he leaves without letting them know.

I put space originally where Yoochun is already an adult, but then again it's LJ's fault for removing it.

Thank you dearie! ^.^

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distorted_mapi July 3 2012, 22:47:55 UTC
awww really emotional,I cried!

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girldevil July 4 2012, 17:37:57 UTC
I'm sorry I made you cry! *hugs*

Thank you for reading ^.^

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missyoosu July 3 2012, 23:42:22 UTC
HEY~!!! Welcome back! I'm glad to hear your surgery went well.

You're right; this IS your longest oneshot ever and I've always wanted to read angst written by you since you write a lot of fluff. I was a little worried that this fic wouldn't end happily, but thank goodness it did! I couldn't believe that I kept sniffling as I read more and more. It was so heartbreaking. *sniffles* You write angst pretty well. :D

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girldevil July 4 2012, 17:40:50 UTC
I know! I didn't realized the number of pages until I was done writing. I was just really feeling angsty that time while I started this. I'm glad you liked it, especially coming from you! I know I don't usually write angst but I wanted to try for a change. Glad it did well *blushes*

Thank you so much for your compliment, I'm really flattered! Thank you so much for reading! Really appreciate it! ^.^

PS. I'm sorry I made you sniffle *hugs*

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ting5 July 4 2012, 00:03:52 UTC
It's been a little while since I last read a heartwrenching Yoosu. You made me cry as I read and boy am I glad that they have a fluffy ending ^^

P.S. Hope you are all recovered and well now. Take it easy though.

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girldevil July 4 2012, 17:42:17 UTC
I'm sorry I made you cry! I didn't intent to! *hugs*

Of course, I am a fluff writer, I will always end my stories with happy endings and I can't handle CD at all.

Thank you so much for reading! ^.^

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