death row 2 (snape/potter)

[girl_tarte]

title: Death Row (2/5?)
pairing: Snape/Potter
warnings: WIP; HBP spoilers
previously: Chapter One: Malfoy Manor

note: big big thank you to buckle_berry and apple_pi for beta-ing like a pair of pros. this chapter is for secrethappiness as a good luck present and a (very) late happy birthday. love you, pinn.

Comments

[buckle_berry]

Snape’s heart beats, oddly fast, into the floorboards.

sigh. i do love it, you know, even though you've done terrible things to my wizard boyfriend.

[girl_tarte]

POV demands, berry! you know I *adore* Lupin.

*applies patches to elbows*

[elmathelas]

I'm so enchanted. I love the presence of a strong plot.

[girl_tarte]

this makes me happy. thank you. it's quite fun to write something longer and meatier for a change.

[elmathelas]

yr up early.... if i stomped my foot enough do you think you'd go over to my lj and write naughty things about viggo for me?

for i am awake and wretched.

:--P

[secrethappiness]

*sighs* So I read this and then walked away so I could formulate my feedback. Even though I know the gist of the story, it's really nothing without your words. I love the detail of your writing and the intricacy of this plot and everything.

A good luck present and a belated birthday? Today, I win. *slaps your bum*

[girl_tarte]

you win - as always, boo. :D

[overloved]

*puts tiny harry in my own pocket*

i am awed at you, becks. i awe and a i lust.

*tiny tarte in mouth*

[girl_tarte]

I was worried about teeny tiny harry. I thought, if I overdo this it could go all cutesy and nauseating, but if it is what the hell; I couldn't resist tiny harry either.

yay, biz, yay! cannot believe you are reading this. if I had ron on this journal I would ron you. I vig instead.

[overloved]

teeny tiny harry was vaguely unsettling. also, i was all eee, don't squish tiny harry, snape!!

[slash_stalker]

I am so hooked on your story - can't wait to read the rest!

Will Severus let Harry speak again soon? Harry must be terribly grubby, after the injuries and seeming to be stuck in that little room for ages. I hope it was Ron that was at The Burrow and thus safe.

Very interested to see how Severus and Harry's relationship evolves.

[girl_tarte]

oh hey, thanks for reading. I'm glad you're enjoying this.

I think Harry was pretty well looked after at Malfoy Manor actually - lots of books, a nice room, art therapy, personal grooming (eventually) ;). He'll probably get a little unkempt at Spinner's End, though.