REPOST: death row 1 (snape/potter)

[girl_tarte]

I am off to New York, New York, tomorrow morning at spank-my-arse o'clock, so I will not be around very much for a bit.

That said, I have a parting shot. And here it is.

title: Death Row (1/5?)
pairing: Snape/Potter (to a certain flist sector, please forgive me)
warnings: WIP; HBP spoilers

note 1: fulsome thanks to secrethappiness, apple_pi and buckle_berry for input and beta-ing

Comments

[buckle_berry]

Since I've been meaning to comment on this anyway, seems fair to do it here :)

I laughed all the way through. Your Snape is so pissed off, at himself as much as anyone else. Much more of a sense of humour than you usually see - “Will you be mother or shall I?”

Also I like your Bardot-esque Harry and up himself little Malfoy. I am intrigued to see where it ends up. You'll have me loving snarry yet. (Maybe.)

[girl_tarte]

oh berry berry berry. I'm so pleased you liked, especially as you will be beta-ing the rest - ha!

there is so much snarry you must read. come to me for recs.

[magic_helmet]

I am only now finding the time to get stuck into this.

This first chapter was lovely! I love prisoner Harry, and to be kept prisoner without his voice just seems so sinister.

Of course, Severus is at his snarkiest best!

Harry throwing himself at Snape made me a little uncomfortable. I found it a little hard to read - I wanted to look away. And I think that's GREAT! I totally related to Snapes reaction. Good job there!!

And you left with a cliffie. I would accuse you of being an evil bitch, but since I can click onto chapter 2, there wouldn't be much point!

Great first chapt though. You've sucked me in.

[sophinisba]

Hi, I have just followed you hear after reading your Slashababy fic and I decided to try this one since it got marked as under appreciated in that meme. I know you didn't feel great about the Slasha fic but I wanted to tell you again that I really enjoyed it.

I also really like this so far. Your Snape is smart and snarky and morally ambiguous and that is just how I like him, and also there is plot that is not too obvious and I am worried for Harry and the others and I'm looking forward to reading more of this.

[akuma_river]

Well this is very interesting.

I wonder why Voldie needs to keep Harry alive.

Absolutely love Snape's point of view of things. Poor Lucius and Draco, they've been demoted to lackey's and may not even survive the war.

And why does the Ministry think the war is over? Who do they think has won?

Love it.

[snarry_reader]

Just a quick comment to let you know that we've added this story to the snarry_reader on our Master List here.

If you'd like us to make any changes to the link, etc. please let us know.

Thanks,
Gaycrow, on behalf of the Reader.