Mmmmm. First kiss, yay! And very nice. Their hesitation is very well-done, as is Danny's fear that Mac is just going to beat him to a pulp for taking liberties. It's nice to see the barriers and defenses start to come down as they get into it. And I always like it when they rest their foreheads against each other -- don't ask me why, it's just one of those things.
I would think that Danny would be convinced that bodily harm will come his way for quite a bit, even as an irratonal fear. I think it'd take him a while to get over that fear too.
There would be some point where they just caved and gave into it, no matter what they are doing. Both are reistant, stubborn, logical creatures.
It's just what struck me about them in the request. I have a hard time imagining Mac making the first move, as well as Danny being quite nervous about losing a body part or consciousness for putting the moves on Mac.
She likes the first kiss thing, asked for a Mac/Jack too. So you may see that. ;-)
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There would be some point where they just caved and gave into it, no matter what they are doing. Both are reistant, stubborn, logical creatures.
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It's just what struck me about them in the request. I have a hard time imagining Mac making the first move, as well as Danny being quite nervous about losing a body part or consciousness for putting the moves on Mac.
She likes the first kiss thing, asked for a Mac/Jack too. So you may see that. ;-)
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