Comments | gin200168: drabble for <strong class="lj-user"><a href="/read/user/stellaluna_">stellaluna_</a></strong> since so far she is the only one to request........

gin200168

drabble for stellaluna_ since so far she is the only one to request........

Apr 17, 2006 23:32

Drabble that grew totally out of control for stellaluna_

Not beta'd cause it's FOR my beta....

( 536 words of M/S hankypanky )

mac taylor/stella bonasera, het, csi : ny, fic

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stellaluna_ April 18 2006, 06:40:54 UTC

Okay, so this? Yeah. Totally Teh Hawt. I love Stella's crankiness with him when he tries to be all logical and resistant, and the way he desperately tries to maintain his cool while he's, er, getting his mind and other things blown is a delight.

And this just proves, once again, that people need to listen to Stella.

gin200168 April 19 2006, 04:17:45 UTC

I couldn't help going completely south when you said "oral experimentation". And in his office that's practically half glass? Yeah. Definately got the inapporpriate place. And since it's inappropriate, lord knows Stella's gotta start it. Cause you know HE's not gonna.

Now if you didn't have the inappropriate place stipulation... well, let's just say it would have been *quite* different.

He is in the office of glass. He can't outwardly look like he's getting his mind (and other things) blown. Not without getting a lot of tongues wagging, and lord knows he wouldn't want that.
Seriously, she needs to be listened to. She's queen genius of the lab for real reason, you know... ;-)

Am suprised that you didn't pick out my personal favorite part.

wandering_sag April 20 2006, 17:21:33 UTC

Now if you didn't have the inappropriate place stipulation... well, let's just say it would have been *quite* different.

OK, you got my curiosity with thatone. Much as I loved this version, I'll bite. How else did you see it?

And yes, Mac needs a bit of corruption at the hands..err mouth of Stella ;)

VEry well done.

gin200168 April 20 2006, 20:30:52 UTC

*blink*

ZOMG. New person. Hi! :-D I thought nobody read my journal besides stellaluna_ and scarletts_awry... This makes me very happy. :-D

Oh there is a *very* different image that exists for that. Location, among other things, is different. (but it *is* M/S) Stel and I have discussed the particular scenario before, that's why I made that reference.

However, if you so choose to request it on my little drabble request thingy, I shall put it on the "to do" list and it might just appear sometime soon. Just for you. *whistles innocently*

Yes, Mac needs more than a bit of corruption at the hands/mouth of Stella. Or Danny.or both. Or Jack.

Thanks for reading, and acually commenting. If I know that there are people out there that actually want to *read* me, I'll be more likely to write more, and maybe with less poking from stellaluna_... ok, probably not *that*. But more encouraged to write. :-)

*waves* wandering_sag April 20 2006, 20:57:40 UTC

I admit I haven't read your journal before, but moska_v linked me to this wonderful ficlet and I had to comment because as a fic writer I know comments=love ;)

Am off to find your drabble request. You'll be the first I request from because others were flooded by the time I caught up on frineds page reading.

If you work out how to write more with less poking please do share. I'm ticklish so poking distracts me from ficcing o:)

Re: *waves* gin200168 April 20 2006, 21:33:23 UTC

*blink*

I have NO idea who that is. Woah. Random people are reading my stuff. ZOMG. Maybe cause Stel links to me sometimes?

Awww, I get first! Coooolll.

stellaluna_ does have to poke me a lot. I always have a hard time that people are actually *interested* in the junk that I write, and that she thinks that I write good stuff, when she's so good and I'm... well.... not.

And honestly, I feel that these aren't as polished as my other work, and lack a certain... something. But I'm glad you like them. Mac does a lot in my little world, and he does get kinda pushed and pulled in multiple directions between the demands of Stella, Danny and Jack.

There is a half-done M/S sitting on my computer in stagnation... Maybe it will see the light of day someday.

Re: *waves* wandering_sag April 21 2006, 18:29:52 UTC

Honestly have no idea where m-v found your story. Will poke her to find out. Either way I'm glad she did and poked me to it. Her pokey stick is working well, got me to write a post-ep for RSRD. Idea wormed through my brain at work tonight and it was nice to not be blocked as soon as I sat down to write.

I'm actually contemplating posting the meme. Maybe. Most of my fandom friends I left behind when I switched journals. Should possibly remedy that.

There's a massive MS AU sitting in chat files. Hope to get the time to work on it one of these milennia. :o

Re: *waves* gin200168 April 22 2006, 06:15:36 UTC

Stel's poking always works quite well. She has massive poking skills and totally knows it.

Very nice little fic. Poor Stella, her Mac in shining armor is there. :-)

I just posted another small M/S for scarletts_awry's prompt that you might be intersted in. Albeit it's not really abou the sex, but still....

Re: *waves* wandering_sag April 22 2006, 16:04:31 UTC

Mmmm...When I first met moska in another fandom early last year she found out that withholding eps and screencaps worked even better than the pokey stick. Now that I'm online more we just sign on to trillian and start throwing dialog at one another and fics are born.

Glad you liked the ficlet, feel free to request one if you like. Am in two minds about Residuum having a part 2--a) I don;t know or know where to find the legalities of getting the site down and b) I want to see how next week plays out first.

Off to read. It's not all about the smut for me either. I don't write much smut, sometimes the other stuff means even more :D

Re: *waves* gin200168 April 23 2006, 05:36:34 UTC

Stel just has skills, you know? She and I are a great matched pair. And she and I have come up with fics and things over IM. Lord knows we are trouble together. :-D

Hrm. I just might request one. What do you do/don't do? Slash? Het? What pairings are you for/against? I don't want to request something that you're like ZOMG ewwww about.

I'm definately not all about the smut, but if there is well written teh sexx0r mixed in... Well, I'm not gonna complain. :-p Especially when it's particular pairings. ;-)

Re: *waves* wandering_sag April 24 2006, 19:48:33 UTC

Yah, moska and I are the same. Double trouble. My two are up for SL if you want to read them ;)

I don't do solely male slash on account of their being nothing in it for me o:) but can and have been convinced to write a 3some. Either FFM or MFM, othrwise I'm pretty much M/S. Actually I'm pretty much Stella focused ;) She's gotta get her TLC.

Re: *waves* gin200168 April 25 2006, 19:16:19 UTC

Hrm. Maybe I shall.

Ok, you don't do most of mine, but hey, to each his own. At least you do a few.... I don't do femslash, but I do M/M, het and 3 somes (M/F/M) although I can't write them.

Maybe I'll go post a request then. :-)

Re: *waves* wandering_sag April 26 2006, 07:26:53 UTC

:) Looking forward to tackling yours, though may be a day or so because all I'm currently capable of is sick fic on account of feeling crap.

Do I get rewarded with a wake up kiss from Mac or Danny--or hell Stel--when I finish? :)

Re: *waves* gin200168 April 26 2006, 17:06:12 UTC

That's ok, -- I still haven't gotten a chance to work on yours (although I HAVEN'T forgotten about it!) cause life has been nutballs lately. Between bad work things, finding new job, birthday, planning trip.... arrgghhhh.

When I get the occasional chance to work on it, Jack's gone and stole away Mac so Stella's gotta fend for herself at the moment. I keep telling myself not to forget about the M/S ficlet. I have a good image of it, cause that's how I work-- I get images that are short, or frozen in time, and then I try to build on them. I definately have the main 'action' in my head, but

Do I get rewarded with a wake up kiss from Mac or Danny--or hell Stel--when I finish? :)

Grrrrrrrrr RAWR. MY stellaluna_. Get your own! Grrrr. As from teh Stella? You gotta fight the boys for that. ;-) I'll take me Danny or Mac... Or both.

Re: *waves* wandering_sag April 28 2006, 17:55:18 UTC

*Giggles*

Nutballs, I like that phrase, though I'm sorry things have been zooey. Birthday? Happy Birthday. And good lick with the new job. Going to be in that boat in a few months. Where ya going on your trip?

oh and I've added you. Because after I linked you to the drabble I wrote for SL, I realised it was friends-locked. Oops.

And OK, you keep the boys occupied and I'll get my kiss ;)

Re: *waves* gin200168 May 8 2006, 23:56:34 UTC

Hhahaha Well, those that know me know that I have a tendancy to use my own vocabulary. It's often a source of amusement for many.

And yes, new job. Haven't found one yet, but considering the hell I went through with this one, a lot of stuff is better.

I get to go to NY for 2 days. Definately not enough time, but better than never seeing it at all.

OMG! YOU HAVE TO DO MORE OF THE STICKIES STORIES. Period. End of discussion.

Since I was behind on soooo much, I just now got to read it. But am glad I did!

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