Why do people always make up weird names when they write stories? My characters are always named boring names like Robert.
Other than the distraction of the names, I liked the visual. You should add a plot and serialize it. It could be like the weekly installment of whatever's going on in Matt's head.
I do have sort of a plot in mind. I make up weird names to give the story a more fantasy/middle ages setting. Perhaps there are a few Bob's running amok, but not yet. Bob is actually the name of a favorite bartender I have come up with, and I may include him somewhere in this.
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Other than the distraction of the names, I liked the visual. You should add a plot and serialize it. It could be like the weekly installment of whatever's going on in Matt's head.
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