New short story

[gimme_bajynah]

This is a short story I wrote, about a neurotic, claustrophobic man experiencing hallucinations on a crowded train. It's about eleven pages long.

Comments

[brearenee]

i wish i had this on paper.
i want to read it but i just cant read stories off the screen. it really kills my eyes and i pay more attention to the glow than the actual words.