Challenge, Horses

[gilmoradict]

A field of sleek race horses breaks from the gate, with the ensuing excitement and noise.  As the group rounds the first turn, the colt in the lead falters and falls back, limping noticeably, and tossing his beautiful head.  The jockey struggles to control him, gradually bringing him to a stop near the fence, where he leaps from his charge’s

Comments

[laura_holt_pi]

Nicely done! Can't wait for the next part.

[gilmoradict]

Thanks - not up to your standards, but hope it's entertaining. Can you tell me how to "hide" the body of text so it doesn't take up so much room.....

[laura_holt_pi]

Where you want the cut to begin you need < lj-cut> (without the space between < and l)

At the end you need < /lj-cut> (again, without the space)

[gilmoradict]

Finally got it - wasn't that hard once it worked! =) Thanks for your help - and for all the Remington stories. You bring them back to life!