A Spike ficlet - still_grrr prompt this week.

Mar 08, 2011 01:23

Title Orpheus. Really.

Rating PG: it's Spike, so there is some language of a British kind.

Word Count 432

Prompt 212 - Greek/Roman mythology - Spike has a classical education, we know. Even in his dreams.

Characters/Pairing (if any) Spike

Orpheus. Really. )

still_grrr, my fic

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louise39 March 8 2011, 01:37:00 UTC
By this stage he has some inkling what story he’s in...

Heartbreaking. But Spike doesn't know his whole story yet.

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gillo March 8 2011, 01:40:53 UTC
No - though it's there in the dream, just waiting for him.

Thanks for reading.

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zanthinegirl March 8 2011, 01:47:13 UTC
Oh, lovely! you do write such a satisfying Spike.

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gillo March 8 2011, 20:34:06 UTC
Thank you - what a lovely thing to say!

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slaymesoftly March 8 2011, 02:02:59 UTC
Oh, nicely ouchie! Poor Spike, of course his classical education would guide his dreams...

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gillo March 8 2011, 20:34:55 UTC
Poor woobie Spike - it made sense to me - one way he could have saved her....

Thanks for reading.

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confusedkayt March 8 2011, 06:30:35 UTC
Oh, ACK. You warned that there was going to be a knife-twist, but this was a twist with flourish. Poor Spike!

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gillo March 8 2011, 20:35:42 UTC
Poor boy - but the title was a honking big clue! Thanks for reading.

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petzipellepingo March 8 2011, 08:00:21 UTC
But she stumbles, doesn’t she? And she calls his name. His name. So he turns, and sees the expression in her eyes. It’s the love he always knew would never be there. It’s the “thank you for trying it” farewell as she’s dragged back out of his grasp.

He wakes, gasping for the air he’s not supposed to need, not needed any time this last century. And she’s not there. Never will be. Never again. Never, never.

There’s this echo in his head. One hundred and forty six left. Makes no sense at all. But there’s dreams for you. Load of bollocks. Stupid to trust one, even inside it. The stories never change.

"sniffles"

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gillo March 8 2011, 11:02:38 UTC
Thank you. I think. ;-)

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