I mst have taken me an hour to read all that, going slowly to appreciate your language. What a feast for the senses! Sight is prety abviouos, but you used sound and touch to the fullest amount imaginable, and taste nearly so (accounting for the fact there is no food eaten, which might have been even too much).
When I got to, "This is uys, and you know it" everything just stopped.
I really got a very clear image of the bursting of happiness so full that you think you'll go out of your skin.
I was very hopeful with the discussion with Einnes's sister. I remember looong ago when you mentioned that K warnings about Eoin had to do with his own jealously and other problems. What an interesting character who had so much to do with the SHAME Eoin was talking about.
Gosh, if all the writers here had only just a bit of your ability to write description the quality of all the fics would go up enormously...so many of them are mostly dialogue, and compared next to yours suffer so much they seem like heads without bodies. I'm not saying they're bad, it's just that they need more meat to them. And writers with no description lose so much storytelling that can be done just mentioning the items in a room and how they are placed.
When I got to, "This is uys, and you know it" everything just stopped.
I really got a very clear image of the bursting of happiness so full that you think you'll go out of your skin.
I was very hopeful with the discussion with Einnes's sister. I remember looong ago when you mentioned that K warnings about Eoin had to do with his own jealously and other problems. What an interesting character who had so much to do with the SHAME Eoin was talking about.
Gosh, if all the writers here had only just a bit of your ability to write description the quality of all the fics would go up enormously...so many of them are mostly dialogue, and compared next to yours suffer so much they seem like heads without bodies. I'm not saying they're bad, it's just that they need more meat to them. And writers with no description lose so much storytelling that can be done just mentioning the items in a room and how they are placed.
I madly await the next adventure......
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