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Fic: On The Friendship & Sex... (Chapter 3: Scripts & Sickness)

Oct 15, 2006 22:53

Author: Mina (Gildedmuse)
Title: On The Friendship & Sexual Relations (Mostly The Sex) Of Mark J. Cohen & Roger M. Davis
Chapter: Three: Dress Up, Scripts and Sickness
Pairings: Mark/Roger (mentions of April/Roger and Mark/Maureen)
Rating: Nc-17
Word Count: 8,650
Warnings: Umm... Sex? Mark-in-a-skirt, if that frightens you enough to need a warning ( Read more... )

post: fanfiction, fandom: rent

Comments 18

shadow_mage October 16 2006, 04:13:37 UTC

That ending broke my heart..*tears*

It was perfect. Just perfect.

gildedmuse October 16 2006, 06:45:47 UTC

If it helps, it''s only a temp. ending until the next chapter.

shadow_mage October 16 2006, 06:49:36 UTC

^^ yay!

starletfallen October 16 2006, 04:17:01 UTC

About to cry here, ow!

But the sex was worth it. ^_^

gildedmuse October 16 2006, 06:47:02 UTC

I'm pretty sure that rough sex on a metal table top is probably a little owe, too. ^^

starletfallen October 16 2006, 14:17:41 UTC

Heh, yeaaaaaah.... rawr.

crashcart9 October 16 2006, 04:47:24 UTC

Very nice. I love the names turning back into the real ones as Mark writes.

You've got some weird stuff in brackets in here, I was thinking maybe beta marks or something, they're like corrections or some such. They're probably of ome deep symbolic importance to the story, but it's too late for me to get it right now, and I figured I should make sure you realized that they were still in there.

Anyway, this (and the ones before it) are very good. Your weaving of canon is impressive.

gildedmuse October 16 2006, 06:47:43 UTC

Yeah, I fixed those just as you posted, I swear. ^^; I was writing an essay for school and didn't read through this like I should have.

cdvla313 October 16 2006, 06:21:35 UTC

my favorite. angsty PWP that actually, has some plot. (at least compared to other PWPs i've read.) and it doesn't hurt that the smut is really hot. can't wait to read some more.

gildedmuse October 16 2006, 06:48:37 UTC

This is actually the plot chapter. After this, no more plot. I promise.

ogiraffe October 16 2006, 06:41:26 UTC

Oooh I really love this.

Going back and forth between Mark's script and his reality was seriously awesome. And the Jack Daniels/Tom Collins thing made my life better.

gildedmuse October 16 2006, 06:51:26 UTC

I am glad someone caught the Jack Daniels thing. I seriously thought of not using it, beacuse I had no wear to put his full name. But I really, really wanted to, damnit!